The services that America does to the global community is par excellence. For this America has to do greater sacrifices.America's thoughts and actions do not confine to America only. They think about the wefare of the human race in general. I am happy to endorse thus to the poet's thought wave.
America leans in the direction
Of service and sacrifice
To the global community,
Seeking restoration of the utmost sanity,
And of good-faith, homely,
Undeniable values
This is the gist of the poem. As America is the biggest power and the biggest democratic nation, the world look at it with much admiration and hope.
The poem is a good tribute to the gteat nation.
'Appreciation' is a good poem by bridle.The poet is appreciating his intellect, appreciating love, apprrciating
expression, appreciating abilities and at last the life itself. Really is a good advice to all the readers to live a life by appreciating all that er have. I like your writing.
'He has gone'by sodasaya is about the deception of her boy friend.But now he is with another girl, calling her as his new friend. Here his love is not genuine and so not static.Better he has gone. Love is not love that alters when it alteration finds. Remember this.
I hear the phone ring.
I feel the phone vibrate.
I don’t answer.
I got nothing to say.
It is a wise decision not to take the phone if you don't have to say anything.
It is better to shutup you tongue inside in such situations. Othewise the tongue would put you in to difficulties. Good writing.
'Arc and spin 'by dogwood222 is containing the bv tonic of encouragement. One should not be dissuaded and disappointed by the comments and responses. They may change from time to time, situation to situation and person to person.
It is you who has to decide to win or lose. Good writing.
It is a very strong tirade against those show their winnigs in showcase. When the winning is put in showcase, there ends its lustre and enthusiasm. The winner becomes a winless winner. Thus make a winless win a winless losing.Though the words are simple, they give a spinning effect to our brain.
The word 'cold' is spread over the poem getting entwikled
With other words like heart, blood etc suited to the occasion. Cold need not to be cold when it is joined with heart and blood. The loving nature of heart and the sanguinity of blood lose quality and get a negative impact. Good writing.
We were rejected by silence.
We were silenced by the shame.
We were shamed into indifference.
Indifference became the game
What an insight the poet has!
When we are rejected, we become silent. Again sense of shame also makes us silent.Striking lines. I like it.
Science is perfect as its science.science is knowledge perfect at science
knowledge is knowledge perfect at science
at science is at knowledge
at science is at perfect
well known science is well known science at its best
well known science is well known knowledge at its best
Aha! What a striking presentation dear lucifer.
'a crime of beauty ' by lucifer is a beauty. Beauty is a crime because beauty establishes its shining and attraction by mercilssly killing whatever stands its way as obstacles. The onlookers are ignorant of this relegation of whatever if unbeautiful. Good writing.
In irreconcilable indifferences' the poet C E Theiroff dives directly in to the root reason of divorces. Marriage life starts with many expectations. But gradually all hopes disappear and husband and wife has only sadness. Finally they decide to part with broken hearts. A good poem.
The write up of Mr. Thieroff titled '28 Years' is a very good presentation. The author's visit to his father's grave after 28 years with his child in his arms turns out to be a turning point in his thought process and comes out with a mind filled with peace. Good writing.
Earth is prescribed a voluntary dinner of delicious calories. A striking line which
gives a delicius food of thoughts also. Tim Chiu is a prolific poet having much more greatervthings in his mind to pour into minds of the readers.
Wish him all the best in writings.
'Potency conception :viable certainty'of Tin Chiu appear simple but imbibe hardest stuff for thought.The poem ends with tje lines that pride is the ultimate understanding of vacated knowledge. Truths are praised high by all, but when it is extended against them, ot darkens their faces.
The poem'Rhyming in the Rain'by Joeys is a good poem written on rain. Rain has been an attractive subject matter of poetry for many poets from time immemmorial in all languages. Rains do not hinder human progress. Life goes on as usual. Aeroplanes soar high, vessels sail cutting through the oceans etc. A good poem.
In the poem 'The River'the poet Curious Chrissie sharesthe experience of walking along the river side.The poet has successfully pictured through the lines sloping at the water edge, the waterpull and play and the splash of water etc. A beautiful poem. i like it.
In the poem'This earthern vessel ' the poet 3R Write describes the earth we live in as a vessel containing many many valuable treasures. The language is simple with easy to understand vocabulary.A good poem to read. Expecting more such thought generating poems.
In the poem ' A legion of ethics:A cap of egagements "the poet Tim Chiu says :
Earth’s stately, human response…A health cool and long.
A healthy cool, and a lengthy purpose,
With distinct, cold, and godly ramifications -Further he says that it is for balanced
structure. The earth in whish we live is a seat of many many stealthy stellar secrets!The poet's effort to structure it is praiseworthy.
A genuine presentation of the problem of writer's block. But it is not the problem of Fredmom alone. Almost all tje writers have experienced and being experienced this problem. But don't worry and be disappointed due it. It is only a temporary phenomenon. Proceed with confidence.
'I torture myself'by Fredmom is good love poem in its true spirit. Love is sweet and beautiful, but at the same time it is bitter and charmless. When in love we really torture us with very many desires. But in due course we realize that none of them could be materialised. A good poem.
How correct it is that time is the ruler of God and time is the ruler of universe!Whatever God has created is God's standby. In otherwords God is present in anything that God has created. The omnipresence of the omnipotent is stressed here. God is the ruler and His ruling is also God!
'Full moon travels' by Kaz is a piece of imaginary poem. Like all of us he is also dreaming. He flies through the roof in to the night sky and experiences very many strange things. He narrates everything in simple language and in quite an easy to unferstand style. Good poem.
True,true,true the eye of the tiger is the eye of the criminal. But may I point out one correction? It should have been :the eyes of the tiger are the eyes of the criminal. Is is only my suggestion which can be accepted or rejected. What a deep insight the poet has into the eyes of the tiger and the criminal!
I am really suprised to read poems of lucifer. It appears that I an put in a magical world all on a sudden. His'beyond a man of beauty'is not an exception. Really his mind is a tresure house of very many beautiful ideas and thoughts. He is a worthful writer.
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