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Review of Just dreaming  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Just Dreaming. is a nice great poem. It has a good rhythm and the pacing was also perfect. Overall, it was a good attempt to showcase different things about the dream. Nice job!! I'm looking forward to reading more about that. Keep writing!


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Review of God damn it!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It was a very good poem cum story. A little difficult to understand it first but by the time I finished it I got an idea of what it was about. It was a good attempt of showing about how sin is increasing in everyday life.
Overall, I like it. Keep up the good work!


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Review of Time's Come  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hey, this one is a great short poem. It was very sensual and good. I like how you said so much in a few sentences. The only thing is that I'm not too sure if 'Time's come'suits well. Maybe you could use some other phrasing there. That's up to you. Other than that, it was really nice. Keep up the good work!


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Review of Shut Up Shut Up  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
The poem was very well-written. Somehow, it feels like a rant to me. But, still, it was great with no errors. The rhyming, structure, and pacing was great. It had a great chorus and it sounds almost musical.

You have done a good job! Keep writing!!


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Review of Noel Surprise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This was a great poem. It was a simple and sweet poem that encourages the Christmas spirit. It was nice. I like the way it flowed and it tells so much with a hint of simplicity in its sleeve. The rhythm was good and the words matched perfectly with each other.
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Review of Shot to Winter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a good poem! I like how you described the effects of winter. That was really nice. The pacing was good though I'm not too sure about the 'Maniacal' gaze you could use something else or it's a different word. Overall, I enjoyed this little poem. Keep Writing!
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Review of No Other Worlds  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It was a really nice poem. I like it!
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Review of Foreclosure  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That's amazing. This little part is full of so many emotions. I like it. And it made me want to read more of it.
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Review of ??????  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! That's an amazing poem. I really like how each sentence was synching with each other. Great rhythm. Keep up the good work!
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