i understand the feelings exactly, but i have recently learned that dwelling on these feeling is what keeps you trapped, don't concentrate on the why, concentrate on the changing what you want, because if you want it badly enough, it will happen, i am talking from personal experience. it worked for me. the results wont come strait away, be patience, and your life will change to what you want. samcatt
wow, this poem it brilliant, a nice rhythm to it, a full and moving story. excellent. some of the feelings you describe have been very real to me too. amazing. samcatt x x x
i like thisa hell of a lot, its nice to here this from the 'bullies' point of view, it good to know, that they didn't all hate me. a brilliant poem, about something I've wondered for a long time. thank you for that. samcatt x x x
wow, this is truly amazing, i love the structure/rhythm to it, and it makes a lot of sense. p.s. love the pic, im a bit of a photographer myself, if you want to see, go to www.samcatt.deviantart.com. samcatt x x x
not bad, i can feel the emotion in this. it would be a lot better if it was more of a story poem (i don't know the terminology) it feels like it ended half way through a story.
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