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Review of Your return  Open in new Window.
Review by Seamas Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Actual tears in my eyes..

I don;t want to poke fun in anyway, but what about the story of the prodigal son.. I know I shouldnt really be offering advice or counselling, but does he not deserve another chance?
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Review by Seamas Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
LOOL! if I'm gonna die it's gonna be by the hand of my favourite thing ;)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An Umbrella,

Such a fantastic piece of prose, very descriptive and analogical.. I like the way each of the four lines of each verse rhymes.. It brings you deeper and deeper!

I'm inspired to read more of your stuff now :)
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Review of rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Short, sweet, simple and to the point.

I think poems that just come to the tongue automatically (or paper as it may be) are the most beautiful!
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Review of "Where You'll Be"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really love the chronological order of this piece.. The more you read the worse 'she' gets and the more you feel empathy for the writer! I'm guessing from my own experience of feelings that this is a true story.

Just when you think somebody cannot get any worse, they do.

A definite warning to the next unsuspecting victim in the final verse, good use of words and prose!
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Review of New Priority  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I love the analogy of the newspaper

a charted out route
like a blueprint
memos and copies
in newsprint.

The verbalisation of how leaders who lead us right into the cellar as well is so true especially in this day and age of politics.

Such an articulate piece of writing, it's almso like Ecclesiastes 'Pointless, everything is pointless.'

Privileged to read!
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Review by Seamas Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow.. You have some mind to be able to write that as a piece of fiction!

'Round with big smiles,
Inviting her to stay awhile,'

what a thing to tell anybody!
How you have captured the reaction from the system as soon as s*** hits the fan strikes a chord in me.

Saying they should've known,

That's a powerful line to finish on, it leaves a lot the imagination and makes the reader want to read on.
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Review by Seamas Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Lol, that reminds me of my first ever relationship. Some things we men just ever won't know the answer to because it really is a womans world out there. That's quite well put across as well, congrats on that one :)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hearts are fallible, just like ourselves.. I love the analogy of being as light as a feather, when usually there burdens which make us feel as heavy as a mountain.. That is a lovely piece of writing, it's short and to the point.
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Review by Seamas Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I need help lol, gratefully appreciating those offering assistance :)
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