I really liked the way, in the story you developed everything along. It really flowed to me..LOL i hope that makes sense in a way. but i like it. I write stuff like this too. So keep up the good work. I cant wait to read more of your work.
PS i love that is very descriptive!!! i love detail.!
I like it. Although i dont know if it is present time or taken place in the past. because of the elvis look-alike reference that was it. It made me sad when, Tara/Tommy just was filled with disgust with himself when he looked at himself/herself in the relflection. And when the skinheads attacked. Oh man i was like 'Oh s***' in my mind. Really great job! XD
Hi. I am new to this site. I deceieded to put a short story i just wrote on here to see what attention or feedback rather is would be. Plz feel free to comment.I am Cassandra Brown. Pen name as well. seerofdoom@writing.com dont know if that helps but yah.
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