I really enjoyed this list. It was very entertaining to read, and it has motivated me to want to make my own! Maybe I will!! It was helpful that you listed everything in alphabetical order. I really enjoyed this a lot! You are absolutely right when you say that everyone has things to be thankful for, and you should feel thankful every day and willing to have a new attitude every morning when you wake up. Thank you for inspiring me to feel more thankful.
Loved this acrostic poem! It made me laugh for some reason.. maybe it was because you added a picture with the poem, and the cheesy-ness made me laugh! I LOVED THIS POEM!
I noticed that you are involved with the Reviewer's Group. I'm a newbie, and I'm pretty confused on how to contribute to the group! I'd really like to review certain things that the group is reviewing but I'm not really sure how. Also, how did you get that cool picture of Saturn next your name? I noticed that lots of people on WDC have really cool Halloween pictures next to their name, and I'd really like to learn how to get one of those pictures! Can you help me out?
I like the idea of the story. It seems like you have a good beginning going on. When you use dialogue, make sure you start a new paragraph after adding the dialogue instead of having dialogue in the middle of a paragraph. I'm really liking this story so far, but I was kind of surprised when I came to the part about the mother being murdered. If your story includes violence like this, that's completely fine, but I would suggest to put the rating as 13+ or 18+ instead of E, because many people only read E writing, and you don't want them to be shocked or disgusted if they stumble upon that particular part in this chapter. Otherwise, this is very impressive. Write on!
Very helpful! I loved the metaphor you created at the beginning of this writing piece.. Your knowledge about writing pieces is going to be very helpful to me, I'm sure! Keep on writing and giving great advice!
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