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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A hadron is no title poem? found out this the very fist time.it's written with clear thought about the snowbound winter weather can be lost on clueless people like clown who are clowning about everything regardless.but to be shoe less in snow can be very painful even for a clown.what is he trying to say here?
a thought process is not very clear,
Jaya H.
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Review of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
a five lines with a great message.based on Lewis 's words of courage. suggesting to aim higher,aiming low is a crime, if your aim is higher your efforts are justified for higher gain. so gain is always depends on you your aim. this is Haiku type of poem , constructed well and thought process is good here.
a good read,
Jaya H.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
what an unique poem on the topic never been written before. describing the new team of bold 5th graders ready to march, before the opening bell.the poem is dedicated to them , per footnote. for a distant drum roll, makes the feet marching not knowing whether the march will bring victory or defeat?
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of The Lakefront  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
a picture of lakefront is painted in this poem, since we got the lovely Michigan Lake , I have enjoyed it many times , at twilight moments described here . it's so pleasant moments in life that more you experienced , more you enjoy. the poem flows well, the last part reads like a prose, in fact it's called as a poem but it's more like a prose, though written well.
a good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Hometown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
this is a sad story of the corrupted city, the sad part is nobody wants to correct anything. It is getting bad to live there but people just suffered they just noticed increase in crime, jails filling with criminals nut don't do anything about it.
A sad, realistic poem,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
the piece is about the new ways of communication. It has global effect with boundaries of communications are much broader now, but it didn't bring necessarily people closer, but it has become kind of impersonal , mechanical it allows you to communicate easily but it also makes it a burden ,or addiction to the device of communication.the piece doesn't discuss the negative here but only positive side of the new technology .a good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Battle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
involved in prayers in turmoil and tears, the god's presence is imagined. on the death bed , the journey just begins the new scope of life is revealed.In this poem a mystery of a prayer is experienced;where both the worlds met together. the thought process in this poem is hard to judge but prayers are involved in the life for sure, is understood.
A realistic way to establish here is neededfor sure,
Jaya H.
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Review of Ethnicity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
In the Global atmosphere people with different back ground , different cultures crossed paths in their lives, though each has same love for their children, and the same common grounds their accents keep them apart, but the body language brings them together again is what portrayed in this poem
. The flow goes well, even if it reads like a prose, the thought process is clear and well displayed, in few lines one has captured the nature of ethnicity in the global picture of life,
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a message to the little ones to remember the past experience of love their childhood home. at the same time the time is painted with a rich language in the piece , about the bride , and the woman in future is painted with relish. THe piece is short , and not sure of the central idea there, but looks like depicting woman's life
A good read,
Jaya h.



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Review of Starlight Parlor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
In this short poem one expresses the love for other with a sweet memories of the talk taken place in starry light , in parlor, these memories are dear to the person who cherished the act itself.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The upbeat poem about living gracefully.
with the loss of loved one, one doesn't live without a hope but with strength and new hope to meet each other in heaven, though it 's man-made place of hope of the believers among us , the tone is vey upbeat and it helps to swing the mood and be hopeful.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of About My Writing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
it's a story of writing about the own world. everybody selects his/her lifestyle and then spending the life accordingly but writing takes the part mainly within his/her world. the poem is talking about it. it 's not very clear in thought process , but one has to read in between the lines and get the meaning behind it.
A suggestion required,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
a last pilgrimage brought back the memories of the parents, whose life has been painted in this piece. It's well documented life story of two lovers. who hasd simple living and simple thinking but could n't support each other for long and their wishes were unfulfilled with no regrets by survivors. but a devotion of life in helping others.
A noble life sketch ,
Jaya h.


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Review of Dance of love!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Is it a dance of love? It seems so tragic to be called as such.The flow is patchy and rhyming seems deliberate. the partner seems to be unwilling to dance and all the expressions reflected the ill-will. the music may not be appropriate, can't be sure because no mention of it.
A sad way of dancing,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
the fortune no one ever knows. where is destiny, where is birth place is not in your hand. your belief is only a guideline for you. but then you have deal the cards you never asked for. but it was given to you, a belief in god is only you have left with to work on. these are thoughts displayed in this poem.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Angels  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
what's a static poem? I'm reading it first time. It's a story of a confused mind. who doesn't where to begin or end.
The thought process is clouded here and it reflects in the poem. where the flow is good with distinct rhyming scheme used.
A confusing poem,
Jaya h.

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Review of urban (haiku)  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A comment on a basic survival is to the point. there is lot is said few lines of the haiku. When the living conditions worsen due to the income problem, loss of a job, loss of the residence or any unforeseen reasons urban social plights start . and that's vicious circle one gets into until some solution is reached. in so few words the problem speaks a lot. but one has to imagine the kind of life one can expect under the situations as real as one can imagine. Thhis is the topic one can write a ton of literature but this is thought provoking enough.
Jay H.
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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I'm new to the twitter world so this poem is learning process for me. I know the president Trump Loves share his view by twitter , and tries to run the country through that. but that is so impersonal way to comment on the world issues, that is close to unlikable.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Homelessness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
a good sketch on homelessness . the 3 reasons discussed here are very true but there is no way out of it. The solutions discussed here includes government and community. there agencies which addressed the reasons for homelessness, are overrated. nobody can cure the status of homeless people until it bothers them too which is hard to judge and seems to be a major hassle. how to reduce the problem is big job to tackle and no solution is in sight so far.
A tough subject to write about,
Jaya H.
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Review of Fight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
an inspirational poem indeed. wants to overcome all kinds of difficulties from health, security etc. takes on the battle in full swing, or fighting for success day in and day out.the last line says it all as no fight is left unfought

“Words can touch the hearts of many,but will hold the hearts of few” a good message here for all the time , the best way is not to give up the fight in any case
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a good read,
JayaH.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
this poem has no title, it reads well but the topic is vague to understand and it doesn't stick to one thought only .so it pulls from one though to other.the description is written as watching the moon from backyard, but poem is directed to the other ways but the moon.
one scattered thoughts put together here.
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
It's a sad story of an abused woman in the emergency room. with no one's help she is suffering yet another child birth where too previous children need to be taken care of. She waits for some help to appear but at the mercy of ER nurses nothing seems to be working
A heartbreaking story,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
a novel idea of writing on cowboys. I didn't know that so many of the actors took part in western movies. The list is too long for me. I couldn't watch so many of the cowboys' movies. It takes a special kind of a mood to enjoy such movies. It is good to know the information about the subject.
a good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of Breathe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
such a desperate plead in this poem, just breathing is not possible. the controlling factors are spelled out but how to stop that controlling aspect is not specified , it simply says 'no time to breathe'that is sad but may be true in that situation, an helplessness is much more pronounced in this poem.
a sad read,
jaya h.


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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The memories are well documented . The characters of the grandparents are well developed but instead of fun , there may be some impact of these memories must have made upon the young mind which were not discussed at all.spending time with that generation people , one can find a lot of inspiring stories or tips to gather around.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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