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Review of The Way I Live  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a nice article. A story about oneself is quite autobiographical. It seems we can pen our lives in a paragraph if we want to be brief. Being in Kuwait and in the middle east makes one to be knit with the middle east. Being a hobbyist photographer lets one take pictures and treasure them. The article makes us think how we are taken up by our lives and still try to make it as lively as we can. The author is suggested to be more socializing, this indicates how we are so lonely by ourselves. Being dyslexic can also be a handicap.

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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. The poetry makes us think about Maisey and how she does not want to go in the rain. She looks out for puddles and wants to go Splash Splash Splash. She is like a little pink riding hood. She rides through the pouring rain to grandma's house in her raincoat and boots. The poetry makes us think of Red Riding Hood who went visiting her grandma. Maisey comes along as a very becoming granddaughter who is affectionate of her grandma and looks forward to visit her. She goes on to visit her inspite of the rain.

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Review of Star Wars Saga  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice article about the Star Wars 7 Trailer Awaken The Dormant Force. The latest movie is part of a trilogy of a series of 6. The 88 second trailer will be an eye opener to the Star Wars 7 movie. There is hype and excitement around the movie. The Star Wars movies has always made viewer's look up and take notice. The article makes us want to watch the trailer. The article is both informative and entertaining. Watching it 17 times in a row is quite a feat. Viewer's will be thrilled to be served an outer space action movie.

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Review of As It Was To Be  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. There is love and romance in it. It makes us think about how we think about our paramour's and how they are so special to us. we bond with them and they make our perfect partner's. Love is compared to apples in an orchard. It was like a flock of birds in flight. Both remained lover's for year's without end. Every evening is filled with stars that make our eyes shine. A falling snow too can answer our silence. The poetry makes us think about love and what brings with it. It is compared to many things around us.

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Review of Our story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

This is a nice account. The story is quite interesting as it adds to the surrealistic way of looking at thing's. The rendezvous by the sea seems very much in tune with how we feel so free about being near the ocean. The word's have a flow and they are very indicative of how the author feel's about her experience. The entire account is quite fantastic. A mate who cares for her is also in the picture and it makes her feel elated about him. The writing is quite easy but imaginative. The account makes us think how we think wistfully about our experiences and how we relate them.

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Review of Fate or Chance?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. The poetry makes us think about creation, the heavenly lights, the cosmos and the universe. It makes us think of the variety or biodiversity on our planet. The power of spirit makes us wonder and be in awe of it. It sparkles and shines. The poet says survival is a fight. He thinks whether the cosmos is pure chance or is it built on fate. The poetry makes us think about our life on earth. Our evolution as being of pure chance or by the hands of fate. The poet asks to indulge him as he speculates these questions.

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Review of Casino Sin  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. The casino and the temptation's to bet money and win big is at the heart of many. Many play and lose money and turn penniless as time goes by. The one armed bandit is another machine that can wean money away from you. The poet berates how the sin of gambling can turn us to beggar's. How it can make us beg for mercy. He finds no honor in the games of betting. He feels it is like scything the soul with greed. The poetry makes us think about people addicted to the gambler's way of life and how they regret its fallacies.

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Review of Last Pictures  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good story. Jason and his love for Donna shows in the story. Both are out in the mountains. Donna is busy taking pictures. Jason is concerned for her as she is busy at her work. The guide comes in take them to Vamanos. Donna is still busy climbing down the mountain. The story makes s think how we have our passion's and how it can make us go over length's to satisfy it. Taking pictures can make one savvy about what they do. Jason sit's thumbing through Donna's book six month's later. The story has to have a more clearer angle describing why Donna is not around.

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Review of Steamer Trunk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem. A poetry about a steamer trunk makes us think about the good old days when men crossed the oceans in ships. Steamer trunks carried the luggage of clothes and accessories. They were the companion's of the journey. A long sea route makes one nostalgic about the journey. The sea can take over our mind's as the journey over the water's unfold. The musty memories are treasured by the author. The poem makes us think how we feel and emote about the sea faring journey's we take. How it makes us feel a longing for it and the trunk that we carry on such journey's.

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Review of My Legacy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good letter from a mother to her unborn child. It is very much like an advise a mother would offer to her child. She names him Frank and is not sure when he will be up and about. She says she would not be around when he is born finally. There is pathos and tragedy in the boy's birth. She describes herself as having her own way. She develops hobbies of writing and music. Many viewed her as brash, insensitive, argumentative, proud, stubborn, and prone to overreacting. She asks her unborn child to develop his own personality.

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Review of February Second  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a sweet, short and nice poetry. The poetry talks of February second being Groundhog's day. It derives from the Pennsylvania Dutch superstition that if a groundhog emerging from its burrow on this day sees a shadow due to clear weather, it will retreat to its den and winter will persist for six more weeks, and if it does not see its shadow because of cloudiness, spring will arrive early. The poetry makes us think about how we use animal's to predict the weather. Groundhog day is special as it also makes us think of spring and what it will bring forth.

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Review of Summer Gold  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

This is nice poetry. It makes us think about summer and the harvest it bring's with it. The harvest is of corn cobs and the cobs are cleaned of their crop. They line up in rows for us to see. The entire harvesting is a joy to our mind's. The fruit's of harvest feed us through the year. The corn is also boiled. The produce is ripe and is hence ready to be eaten. The poetry makes us think like a farmer does. It makes us think the joy we derive from working in our field's and reaping from the fruit's of the soil.

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Review of Outer Limits  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is good poetry. Every time we get or receive a card it makes us feel glad. The more we receive makes us think about our popularity. Are we growing popular among people or is it how they perceive us?. The author receives card's from a Dan, a Stan or a Joe. He wonder's why they send his card's. An email does not require payment, unlike card's that have to be paid for. More so if we have to send back one or reply to one's we receive. He also wonder's if alien's are behind these card's. He wonder's if it is the gray's and he say's so to his wife. The poetry makes us think about the thought's that go in our mind's if we do not know where or how we receive letter's or card's in our mailbox.

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Review of Bowling  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is nice poetry. Bowling is appropriate topic to talk about especially if we feel strongly about the game. The pins falling off as the ball hits them is a sight not to miss. The pins fall as the poet tries to get them. His mates too have a go at the pins and they lose. Multiple strikes are needed to have the pins go down. The poetry makes us think how we evaluate ourselves on the games we play. The games add to our moods and emotions. It also gives us joy and affects the way we think. A lucky strike or a dud can make us feel the same way we feel for thing's happening to us in our real lives.

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Review of Flight into Egypt  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This poetry is nice to read. The poetry makes us think about Egypt and the desert life. The scorching heat and the need to survive it. There are vapor dreams and emptiness as the desert stretches ahead. The words of our dreams linger. There is waking up in the midnight. It is said to be a mind fools quest to do so. A desert can do many things to us and make us behave as it desires. The scorching heat can add to our travail's. The poetry introduces us to the life in Egypt and the scorching desert that exists in Egypt. The poetry also questions will a tyrant suffer the same fate.

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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good query or cover letter. We all need to publish our works at one time or another. We need publisher's to take notice of what we need to convey to our audience or even to just be published for our own satisfaction. The query or cover letter is a presentation or request to take notice of the work being presented. It also introduces us to possible publisher's wanting to publish our work's. One should take care to craft a good query or cover letter covering all point's needed to convey what we want to be done.

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Review of Winter's Ghost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is nice poetry. Winter is seen as a torment and the talk is about Winter's ghost. Bird's walk across the snow over lawns. A rusted swing sways in the breeze. Summer is missed by the author and he thinks the dog days are worth their time. He longs for sweet lemonade shade afternoons. He also looks forward to New Orleans evening's. He long's also for warmth and for Louisiana's moons. The poetry makes us think how winter turns everything cold in its wake. The snow lies around fence posts. It also makes us long for summer and its beauty.

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Review of Falling Up  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice article. The writer wants to inspire other writer's and wants them to see the light. He believes he can enlighten their lives. Many writer's the author claims to be sightless beings with fog covering their eyes. He claims to make them be able to see the light. He thinks about making them write about the many thing's that surround us. He wants them to write about how water tastes and a drop of water hanging from a leaf tip. He wants to teach them to see infinity in the skeleton of a leaf. The poetry makes us think about how the author want's and is passionate about writing. He want's writer's to see the joys of writing.

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Review of Phoenix Rising  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is good poetry. The Phoenix is out to rise from the ashes it is burnt to. It is it's incarceration and hence the poetess feels the torment she undergoes. A cross country road trip makes a new scene to the eyes. She eats in ice cream in Ohio with her puppy licking the fallen Vanilla drops. The sun is overhead and the shadows are left behind. The phoenix is burnt from the fire that engulf's it. It is the reason we have life as it strives to be reborn from a tragedy. A phoenix is perhaps a lesson to us to rise to a new life from a decadent past.

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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a good story. The snowman is a boy's wonder. He rejoice's in his making and also feels pride when it's done. Making a snowman needs quite an amount of skill. Pushing the snow around and making balls out of it is needed to make a snowman big enough to look like one. A carrot for a nose and buttons for the coat make it look more real. Black ember buttons are used to make a mouth and two eyes. He also gave it a big smile making it a welcome sight to onlooker's. The story makes us think how a snowman is a source of joy to a small boy and perhaps to grownups like us too.

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is a nice short story. The story sounds like the many jokes or crackers we come across. It has humor and it is quite wild. A humorous story might have other sides that has to be explored and can't be done with a last liner. It is a dialogue, a change of scenes and the humor is more like old English humor we come across with English writer's. The dropping of the stethoscope and looking down under is a good way to diagnose ills of patient's. This is more due to the fact the doctor has a good idea of the habits and preoccupation's of their patients as most live around or are familiar to him.

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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is good poetry. The poetry makes us think how we think about thing's we are capable of. It can make us other's smile or make fun of us. It is only time that can show us if we are capable of our abilities or they are just merely our thought's. The Orangutan believes it can fly. The Giraffe is not of the opinion. They have a confrontation and the Orangutan says the giraffe is always bent on bringing him down. The Giraffe is amused he never sees the Orangutan fly. The poetry makes us think of the many animal crackers or jokes or comics we come across that have similar interludes.

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Review of This is confident  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a good poem. The body is analysed. How it is curvy with bones not showing. Lying and watching the ceiling the poetess thinks up her words. The body is also large. She grasps the sides of the cold glass. The red tinge comes forth. The high that comes with it is surrealistic. The skeleton figure looks back. It almost seems like looking back from a mirror. The eyes are tear stained. This makes the poetess feel confident. The poetry makes us think about the many things that we think and our body over time is one.

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Review of Ocean Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. A poem about Mars the red planet evokes a sense of awe in us. The tiny planet shines in the night sky high above the ocean. Mars represents the god of war in mythology. Mars is also our neighbor planet and the closest planet to earth. Its position among the stars makes it stand out as its red light flashes forth. A walk by the ocean across the sands with the waves splashing is a perfect scene to watch the red planet above you. The poetry makes us nostalgic of all the moments we spent watching the stars in the dark sky and wondering about their beauty.

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Review of Sat on a box  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This is good poetry. The poet talks about waiting for her man. She might as well fuck a duck. She sits on a box. The rainbow in the sky shows irony in its color. Even a leprechaun's hat won't help him to see the irony of a rainbow. She waits for the man by the side of the road and calls him a slimy toad. She thinks she can down a beer instead of waiting. He will gloat after he arrives and he is also a filthy goat. She wonders if she can walk instead of sitting around. She eventually decides to stay under the rainbow and to pray for her halo. The poetry is very much about how we wait for people who never come around.

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