eurailmap's (trainlover) Reviews

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#2811050

Review of Memories Engrained

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

This is really great. I saw no mistakes. At the end I think there should be 4 periods though. According to the punctuation rules, that is. I like the thought too.

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#2784635

Review of The Seed

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

OK Newbie- I am being perfectly honest when I say I can't find a thing wrong with this. It's perfect! And it's perfectly beautiful and so true of life. I love your writing.

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#2745554

Review of Pages from a Notebook

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This is good. Very good. I only see one tiny little thing to correct. In fact, just one tiny litle dot. "You make me feel... incomplete" 3 dots are enough. 4 is when you leave it unfinished at the end.
You could go far as a writer, I think. Keep showing us this good stuff.

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#2745551

Review of The Life of a Writer

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

You described me and my writing! It's as if you know me. This is probably the best writing of its type I have ever read. Thanks.

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#2741049

Review of The First Song

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I am no expert, but I see real talent here. I see how it could be improved. This poem must be an example of what they call "deep thinking."

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#2589114

Review of The Dieing Pace

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I like this poem very much.I did notice you spelled "dying" and "piece" wrong.
Your words flow well when read. You seem to be one of those "deep thinkers" who usually do extremely well in poetry writing.

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#2582392

Review of To my daughter

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

This is very touching. I would have rated it perfect if you had added that the mother was partly to blame for deciding to give up the baby. Following the first mention of the father's blame, you added words that showed she shared the blame for the conception of the child. That was good. I think you have real talent for writing. Keep up the good work!

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#2556503

Review of Tree Fairies

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi again- I like the story very much. I think there are ways to make it even better, by deleting a few words here and there and replacing them with other words. I'll send my suggestions along with the suggestions on your book. I'll send it to your url on writing.com.

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#2414447

Review of But Then He Was Gone

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

What a great story you wrote. Except for a couple of mistakes I would have rated it 5. Or, maybe I just didn't understand what you meant in one of your lines. You do have talent and an exceptional imagination. Keep on using it!