Very interesting poem how the department kils the anger pointing that the bill has not been paid. Poem with its interesting rhyming words like ripe-pipe ,clear-fear, sink -think and so on is attractive. Short and sweet and simple with direct meaning interpretative by all. Regards
A beautiful poem reminding one of ode to autumn by Keats. Figures of speech like alliteration. Climax decorate the poem. Example :potatoes and pepper soon snow few fruits where winds and so on. Repetition of my my and where give an impact.Last lines seemed philosophical..
I'm so close to home.
Thank you for your invitation for reviewing your first piece of work. It is interesting as it was ornated with figure of speech climax. The poem consists of just two sentences and that too seemed interesting. Selection of vocabulary to suit to the need is appreciative. Regards.
I found this poem interesting as the idea itself was new. Last lines grabbed my attention more because people run away from solitude while that is what the poet could not stay without. Letting the tears flowing and freeing the emotions too seemed attractive. Keep writing
Very interesting piece of work. I was most impressed with the first and second lines. It is True that we feel to see beyond ourselves. Most of the time people mumble with pity. But seldom spends time or share.Let us hope together that such words won't fall on deaf ears.
This piece seemed autobiographical to a larger extent to me. The reading of this made me think if this is not what I want to say too? Yeah... Writer's block has to be overcome. I agree to that too. The aggressive tone of the poem shows that the feeling felt by the speaker is tough too.
This poem made me cry because I have often felt the excruciating pain felt by some one close to me and used to cry saying the tiny bodies were not cremated properly. Yes, indeed. Every mother who would have had a miscarriage are living tombs of flesh and blood.
Good reading. Being a novice in writing.com I was just wondering how the system works. Long before I joined some other site wishing to start a blog but was unsuccessful. This piece helped me a lot to understand about writing. come. Wonderful writing.
Great job. I wonder as to what the words highlighted symbolify. Cacophony of the crows crashing through the open windows is a very good imagery.
The words with repetitive natured wasteful years shows the depth of pain felt by the speaker when ignored by loved ones.
It is highly interesting. Hereby I would like to put up my entry :Once upon a time, there lived an old man. He had lots of kittens as pets. Everyday he used to give milk to the kittens. One day he fell ill. Because of that he could not milk the cow or feed the kittens. He was disappointed. But the kittens chased mice and ate them. Finally they came to the old man brushing by his side. The old man was relieved.
It is a good idea that we have a group like this for reviewing.Iam delighted to learn more about it. I also feel it gives an opportunity to learn more about reviewing,about other members, how one member gets introduced to another through a chain of reviews and works.
Hi Fatcarl.
Got a chance to go through the piece of writing .It is interesting as it is nostalgic and is seems that the speaker of the poem still cherishes the college days and is happy that the duty as a son, friend and Student have been performed well.
The explanation is good to understand even for a novice who has entered the writing field. Great work. But yet an elaborate description on certain features which can be elaborated through hyperlinks could also have been introduced. Well done writing. Come.
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