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Review of Area 51  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Chris Breva *Wave*

I searched for a different type of subject matter word search and found this one. Area 51 -- how cool is this to tackle!!! *AlienG*

What I liked:

I enjoyed finding so many key words that we associate with Area 51. I keep X-Files in my mind while I solve it. There were always good shows dealing with aliens and super secret bases. *AlienGr*

Further Thoughts:

This is a good size puzzle--25 words which fills a tile practically to the brim.

Most were jump-out words that were easy to find. I think bigger words tend to be easier to uncover than shorter words that hide deeply within the tile. There are exceptions to that observation of course ... It took me light years to find "light years" *Laugh* It was the last hidden word I found in the puzzle.

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

I really enjoyed playing this puzzle. It has interesting subject matter and gave me a bit of a challenge at the end. It wakes the brain to tackle other chores to do for the day. *Alien*

Good job!

Until next time--puzzle on!

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WebWitch *Witch*


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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Spooky staiNed *Wave*

I found your Word Search puzzle on the Activities@Writing.com page!

It was right there in front of me. A brand spanking new word search for me to play. I couldn't resist--it was just meant to be! *Ha*

What I liked:

You had me at Horror Weapons! *Ax* What a unique and timely puzzle this is. It's almost horror month on WDC with October and leading up to Halloween.

Additional Thoughts:

It is a good size, 20 words to uncover. I had fun finding those weapons and thinking of the movies they are associated with. *Knife*

I approached this one differently than I usually do. It takes discipline to do it this way. I did it word by word, first column up to the third. I felt so organized in my weapon search! *Laugh*

Usually, I just scan the puzzle and grab obvious jump-out words. This was kind of fun to do in order of their place on the list.

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

Well, I'm delighted I found a new puzzle to play that gets me in the Halloween horror movies mood! *Vamp*

Good job! *WitchHat*

Until next time--puzzle on! *Puzzle2*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there, krichtig

I came across this word search puzzle. I've become very fond of playing these puzzles, lately. Yours showed up on the page where I pressed completely random on the puzzle page type.

Why I decided to stop in and play?

It was the title. I remember the Golden Girls fondly. Actually, my mother had watched them when they first came out and I hadn't done so, yet. I called her one evening and she said, "Could I call you back? I'm watching the Golden Girls." *Laugh* Then my curiosity got the best of me and I turned the show on. Well, needless to say, I got to love the show, too.

Further Thoughts:

Your 25 word puzzle was a joy to work. I loved all the words related to Golden Girls. As I uncovered each of them, I had memories of the show and those priceless characters. I even made one mean cheesecake! *Laugh*

Parting Thoughts:

What a joy it was to find this word search puzzle. It brought me back to those "Golden" days! *Gold*

Conclusion:

It is indeed a wonderful tribute to the comedic genius that was this series!

Good job!

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*

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Review of MEMORIAL DAY  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*
I am reviewing your poem because it popped up on the random Read & Review, click. *Smile*

Initial Impression:

Your title and brief description honor those who have put life and limb on the line to keep our country free and safe. *HeartW*

Further Thoughts:

No better or truer words have been said than the ones your poem so meticulously expresses. I love that you were able to paint a vivid picture using 11 lines.

The form is an acrostic that spells out Memorial Day. It is well-crafted to make or an easy flow from one letter to the next. You use a wrap when needed, to maintain flawless flow of sentence structure. Many times I've read acrostic poems that end each line on the letter that is the beginning of the sentence. This could make for short clips of thoughts rather than expanding in a natural way.

Kudos for using the poetic options that keep the imagery of the poetry flowing smoothly in our mind's eye without causing a undue pause in the reading. *Quill*

Parting Thoughts:

Manifesting into the greatest nation
Solemn Remembrance
Radical elements

These are strong words that remind a reader what serving our country is really about. *Salute*

Conclusion:

Wonderful poem that tells the truth and touches the heart. *Helicopter*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Types of Cats  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I found this interesting word search puzzle about different types of cats and decided to give it a try. *Cat2*

My Overall Thoughts:

This is a 17 word puzzle. There are a few names of cats I wasn't familiar with. It's fun to see the name and then look up a photo of that particular cat.

The puzzle was a smooth pace, perfect for relaxation and giving the brain something different for an exercise. I enjoy that when I need a break from other chores. It's a great distraction. *Angelic*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

I enjoyed uncovering the world of cats in your word search puzzle. You did a fine job creating it. These are the sort of items that bring us a little fun when we hit a bit of boredom after doing repetitive work doing the day. *Graph*

Good job!

Until next time--puzzle on! *Puzzle3*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there, kenl

My Thoughts:

I found your word search puzzle on the "Browse By Type." I enjoy doing Word Search puzzles. *Bigsmile*

This is a very interesting puzzle to uncover, about searching for the names of minerals within the tile. I love these types of puzzles with a refreshing subject matter. *Writer*

Further Thoughts/Suggestions:

I just have a little suggestion. I think you should have and image and a few lines, different font/color above the tile that will make it eye appealing and draw a player in. However, the puzzle itself is interesting and fun. It was a smooth solve which makes it entertaining as well as fun! *Puzzle3*

Conclusion:

It gets 5.0 stars from me for the entertainment value. *ThumbsUpGreen*
Good job!

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Bee~Worded  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ~LadyBee~

I came across your Bee-utiful word search puzzle doing a random choice on Browse By Type. The busy bees buried within, convinced me to try to at least wing it. *Bee*

My Thoughts:

I enjoyed uncovering all those 25 words on the tile that have things to do with bees. It was a well developed puzzle with a crossover word hidden within another word such as "honey" within the word "honeycomb." Most were easy to find. A few kept me bumbling around tile like a drone locked out of the nest. *Laugh*

Further Thoughts:

I think this puzzle will be all the buzz for those who play it. Buzzing was the first word to jump out at me. Nest was the last. It's those smaller words that get themselves well hidden.

I'd say this was a moderate level puzzle. A couple stings along the way, but then it was as sweet as honey.

Parting Thoughts:

I enjoyed the puzzle. But I also loved your intro over the top of the tile. Your bitty-bee game kept my bee-brain busy.

Conclusion:

It's BEEn fun! *Honey*

Good job!

Until next time--puzzle on!

This is a "The WDC Angel Army"  Review! *Angelic*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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I found this word search on the Search By Type, click. I almost went past it thinking I had done it before, since I have been doing many of these puzzles, lately. I was happy to see I had not done it before. *Delight*

My Thoughts:

This is an interesting author. I have not read any of her books, but I will check them out. I enjoy murder mysteries. She is a Canadian writer. I liked that she chose Quebec to place her characters and scenes. I spotted many French words. Montreal is my where my mother's parents were from. *Quill*

Further Thoughts:

The tile had 25 words to uncover having to do with Louise Penny's stories. You enthusiastically praise her writing and how she brings her characters to life. That makes for a believable story that a reader can sink her brain into! *Brain2*

Parting Thoughts:

This was a well-crafted word search that gave the solver a couple cross-over words to find, which is always fun once you've learned that sometimes, you just need to highlight over a word that was already uncovered such as the word "poet" inside the word "poetry."

Conclusion:

Good job! *XY*

Until next time--puzzle on! *Puzzle3*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am reviewing this item because I've been on a search for interesting word searches since I saw them flying by the review pages during "Game of Thrones" . They caught my interest at that point. *Sword2L*

My Thoughts:

I enjoy doing these activities to switch it up bit when reviewing. It is something that draws a player in and keeps them engaged while trying to solve the puzzle. It also makes it a contest with one's self to beat their best solve time. Of course that depends on the difficulty level. *Magnify*

I've done 25 word puzzles that were easier than some 12-15 word puzzles. Sometimes words get lost easier when there are lots of blank spaces left on the tile. *Puzzle2*

What I loved:

I loved finding Stephen King stories. In this puzzle, Misery was the first word that jumped out at me. And, The Shining was the last. That hid itself for a while, but I got it. *Bigsmile*

Parting Thoughts:

You have a great intro over the tile. Sometimes a a couple lines of introduction in colored font pulls a reader in faster than a couple words saying "Have fun!"

Conclusion:

I had fun solving it, and enjoyed the subject matter.

Good job! *Spider*

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of SONGBIRDS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, innerlight

I've been visiting your Word Search puzzles a lot, lately it seems. This one got my attention. *BurstO*

I love bird watching. It's been one of my favorite pastimes. *Bird* I loved the birds you had listed. I could picture most of them in my head, whether it was bird watching up North or down in Florida. They are always so amazing to watch. *Cherry*

Observation:

"Cedarwaxing" *Right* Should be spelled "Cedarwaxwing"

Parting Thoughts:

This was 25 wonderful birds to uncover on the tile. It was pretty simple until the end.There was repeat of the word SWALLOWS, and even though all words were crossed out on the tile, the tile did not turn green showing everything was uncovered. The, my eyes caught the second Sparrows. I went over it again on the puzzle and voila! *Bigsmile*

Conclusion:

This is a very enjoyable puzzle for anyone who loves birds the way I do!

Good job!

Until next time--puzzle on! *Puzzle1*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Review! *Angelic*

I've been seeing things with 13 in them today for some reason. *Laugh* I saw this little item and decided to check it out.

Initial Thoughts:

Love 13th floor horror stories. I like immensely that this was to be a 100 word story that will be spooky about the 13th floor.

Further Thoughts:

I wasn't disappointed. You did a fine job of bringing out the eerie story in so few words. *Cat*

The whole malevolent voices when she stopped on the 13th floor and entered the hall and made it to the room that had a slightly opened door, was spooky. Yes, her questioning the mysterious 13th floor when she exited the elevator where the 12th floor was the last floor in the hotel, brings on the shivers.

The idea of skipping the 13th floor is due to superstitions. 13 happens to be my favorite number. *Angelic* I've actually stayed on the 13th floor in a hotel in Boston many years ago. At that time, many hotels went from floor number 12-14. *Web2*

Parting Thoughts:

This was a perfect quick read that filled the mind with so much imagery. Writing a story in 100 words takes talent. You've got just the right words to make it a short but eerily sweet horror story. *Piano*

Conclusion:

Great job! *Ghost*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello MissySu
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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I came across this word search you created recently. I'm pretty fond of these puzzles and decided to give it a try. *Smile*

First Thoughts:

The search consisted of 25 words having to do with a barbecue. There were many reminders of those grilling times in the summer. However, those days are getting shorter since autumn is almost upon us.

Further Thoughts:

The puzzle, though a pretty full tile, was not a difficult level puzzle to solve. It was what I call a relaxing word search that is enjoyable. It doesn't give me brain sweat. *Laugh* I love doing these puzzles whether a difficult level or not because it distracts the mind from dreary things that need to be done, such as chores. *Broom*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

This was a delightful puzzle to solve. It brought me back to all the fun times that go along with grilling, and friends and family -- and of course, the food! *Bigsmile*

Until next time--puzzle on! *Puzzle3*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there, Cian Welcome to WDC!

I came across this word search puzzle and decided to give it go.

Initial Thoughts:

I love autumn and the beauty of the foliage here in New England. So this puzzle drew me in!

Further Thoughts:

Your puzzle consisted of 11 words. All of them having to do with the season of autumn. I rate this puzzle as a simple, fun and relaxing one to do. That is important when the brain is tired from other daily stresses and deadlines to be met. This is just the right change of pace that brings new energy to the player. *Puzzle4*

Halloween is a time I look forward to. I love decorating the house in all things spooky! *Skull*

Thanksgiving is a wonderful time of year. It is the pathway to the holidays as the year winds down. *Turkey*

Apples, cider ... such a fresh treat in the fall. I watch my apple trees and look forward to picking the red, ripe apples each year. *LeafR*

Parting Thoughts:

Your word search made me think about the fun times ahead. The leaves are already starting to turn. There's a crispness hitting the air as summer struggles in its last hurrah. *TreeFall*

Conclusion:

Good job!
Very enjoyable!

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of MARA MARA  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest" . Thank you for entering our Beat The Heat Flash fiction contest in August. *Sun*

First Thoughts:

The brief description was humorous. It drew me into the story. *Ha*

Further Thoughts:

It is amusing trying to have Alaska's heat more like Russia's cooler temps. I'm thinking Alaska is cool enough in the summer--relatively. But hey, the point is there were undertones of an evening of hot and heavy, involving puncture marks I imagine. So I guess the heat was between the two of them more than the external temperature outdoors. *Temphot*

This*Right* "The days were hot and sweaty. At least 666°... well maybe only 66°..." *Laugh* That shows something Supernatural is in the air of that statement. *Devilish*


Observations:

humididdy? Did you mean to spell it that way? (Humidity)

I thought there was a bit of a pause while reading this. I get the vampire thing. The emoticon *Vamp* pretty much made sure of that. I just wish there were a way it was shown a little clearer in the writing.

However, the realization came through and the humor also rose to the top. *Bigsmile*

Parting Thoughts:

This was a pretty quirky story. It followed the rules by highlighting the prompt words and placing the word count below. It also kept within the word count limit of 300.

Conclusion:

Fun imagery popped into my mind's eye! *DropR*

Well done! *Popsicle*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*





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Review of Immediate action  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest" . Thank you for entering our Flash Fiction, Beat The Heat prompt in August. *Sun*

First Impression:

I like the title you chose. It implies a sense of urgency. That means there is something about to happen that could mean danger or even death.

Further Thoughts:

This is certainly a different take on the prompt. I wasn't expecting the dire situation faced by this passerby who saw 2 dogs in the car, in the brutal heat. It makes the reader angry that such a thing was done by their owner. It also seemed a likely chance that the "good Samaritan" would attempt to rescue the dogs. And indeed it set forth to do such a thing. *Dog1*

Observations:

You have followed the rules by highlighting the prompt words and by placing the word count at the bottom. You also kept within the 300 word count limit.

Further Observations:

This story had a 300 word count limit. You wrapped up this story in 194 words. There could have been more opportunity to flesh out the characters. A sentence on who the good deed neighbor was as well as the dogs' owner.

The ending states the vet performed a miracle. How?
*QuestionY* Who was the vet?
*QuestionGr* Was it one of the two characters there?
*QuestionO* Was another character unknown?
*QuestionR* Did this happen there, or were the dogs taken to another place to get help?

So many questions that may have been answered with a few more lines, while staying within the word count.

Parting Thoughts:

I like the subject matter of your story. It does touch the heart to see someone trying to save the innocent dogs. After all, he didn't know where the owner was and how long he'd been gone from the car.

Another thought is that the wrong interpretation of the scene could make matters worse for the dogs. Quite a conundrum it is. *Worry*

Conclusion:

Other than the points brought forward above, this is a fine story in the making. It just needs a little tweaking for more depth while keeping within the word count limits.

Well done!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Canine Word Find  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there, dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG
This is a "The WDC Angel Army"  Review! *Angelic*

I found your very interesting word search puzzle on things relating to dogs. I must say you are very knowledgeable in this field. *Dog1*

My Thoughts:

It's a 25 word puzzle. That's a good size for a word search. It does have some issues where longer, hyphenated words are concerned. Sometimes, the word runs out of tile and just doesn't fit in. *Puzzle3*

Example: calm/assertive-energ the [y] didn't fit in the tile.

I liked the different breeds of dogs and the words relating to their training and well-being. It was a good selection of terms you used. *HighlighterB*

Observation:

You may want to edit this puzzle for this: "Boarder-Cillie" I'm sure you meant to spell it Border Collie. I know that because I have your Border Collie exclusive MB. *Bigsmile*

Conclusion:

This word search puzzle has a wonderful subject matter. It's fun and educational.

Good job! *PawPrints*

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I dropped by to have some tea in Wonderland! *TeaB*

My Thoughts:

I have been enjoying doing these word searches, lately. They are fun and give the brain a different type of exercise. They can also be quite relaxing and a fine break from pesky chores. *Angelic*

Your Puzzle:

This is a 25 word puzzle. That's a good size puzzle which can have many crossover words hiding within already uncovered words. Those are fun because you have to be extra careful and be sure to hit the smaller word hidden within the bigger one so it gets crossed out. When I first started doing these it took a while to discover the last word inside the fully green tile. *Puzzle1*

Parting Thoughts:

I have enjoyed the Wonderland puzzles that I've spotted about. I know this activity was pretty intense for those of you who took part in Kiya's creation. I'm happy she added doing the word search as a challenge. I've been having fun! *Rabbit2*

Conclusion:

Good job!

Until next time--puzzle on! *Puzzle2*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*

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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)

Hello ♥tHiNg♥
This is a "The Witch's House"  Review! *WitchHat*

What got my attention here?

I've been enjoying this activity year after year on Official birthday week. I cannot believe I haven't reviewed it, yet. *Shock*

My Thoughts:

This is a fantastic activity that stirs the imagination of everyone who drops in. Your image of Charlie Chaplin is delightful. It is welcoming as well as the title of this item. The alliteration with the "Ch" sounds is perfect to go along with the celebration of the great Charlie Chaplin.

Further Thoughts:

Not only is this a fun place to try out our hands at bringing forth the best lines of alliteration we can think of, we also have many lines to read by those who've already posted here. So many make me chuckle. But then, that is the point of this activity--to bring some of that humor we so admired Chaplin for. He was quite talented and could get us to smile in his silence. Those old movie reels were indeed precious reminders of days gone by. *Movie*

Parting Thoughts:

I am thrilled I finally took a long look at the Charlie Chaplin Chews Chocolate Chutney activity and noticed I never reviewed it. This has been a long-running activity that comes alive during WDC birthday week. I always look forward to it. I try to outdo myself coming up with some interesting and humorous alliteration. Hey, it's not always easy trying to outdo myself! *Rolling*

Conclusion:

Classic! Just like the name on the game. Charlie Chaplin!

Thanks for the fun! *Web3*

Until next time--write on, and...party on! *Party*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of Flash fiction  
for entry "The Terrible Heat" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am also reviewing your item as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest" . Thank you for entering our August Prompt, Beat The Heat, flash fiction.

My Thoughts:

I like the use of the prompt to help solve a huge problem in the deserts; sufficient water resources. Yes, the area is plentiful in oil but lacks the water to irrigate crops. It is the big question of resources and how to be able to share or combine in a way to keep necessities going. However, it's not a simple solution. Oil is very much in demand for nations needing fuel. Perhaps one day it could be figured out how to get sufficient water to the more arid places. I doubt messing with Mother Nature is going to accomplish that. It seems doing so messes up some other resource or destroys areas through flooding as is demonstrated in your story.

Further Thoughts:

You did a good job with the prompt. I like the scientific approach even though the solution proved devastating to others who had to deal with floods.

The "guthra" popnote was helpful. Thank you. *Smile*

Parting Thoughts:

You followed the rules:

Highlighted the prompt words *CheckGr*
Placed word count with item *CheckO*
Kept within the 300 word count limit *CheckP*

Conclusion:

Good job! & Good luck with the contest! *GoLucky*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jenn Webster

Initial Thoughts:

I came across your word search puzzle by clicking on the "Browse By Type" over there on the left side. I love scanning those Word Search options finding something different and educational in some cases.

Further Thoughts:

This was an educational type whereby the words to uncover are synonyms for the word "disturb." Puzzles like these stretch the mind for writers to use words outside the common word. It brings more depth to our story writing. I like that! *Bigsmile*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

This puzzle was fun to do and relaxing. It wasn't one of those that strained the brain, which can become tedious when looking for a game to play to pass the time in between other chores. I'm delighted I found this out of the many pages of Word Search puzzles to pore through, to find the right one for the current mood of the player. *GameBuddy*

Good job! *Mallet*

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I came across this fun quiz in your Official WDC Romance Newsletter. *InLove2*

My Thoughts:

I enjoyed taking this puzzle since When Harry Met Sally is an old-time favorite movie of mine. I love the romantic tension between the two good friends and how that comes to light in such a humorous way. I think Meg Ryan and Billy Crystal were perfect for this movie. They had the chemistry needed to pull the movie together and make it a classic romantic comedy. *PotionR*

Further Thoughts:

Your quiz had some good questions that were not too simple. One had to reach into the cobwebs and picture the story in their mind. I guess I will never forget the restaurant scene. Classic! *Laugh* I still picture Rob Reiner's mom's response. *Rolling*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

Great puzzle. Medium difficulty level, and all round fun bringing us back to that movie that brought us a memorable romance that developed between two good friends. *Puzzle3*

Good job! *Web1*

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of Beating the Heat  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, there Amethyst Angel🍂🧡
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I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering our August "Beat The Heat," flash fiction prompt. *Bigsmile*

Initial Thoughts:

Curious brief description. I sensed a conflict of ideas and sense of humor would be involved. *Ink1*

Further Thoughts:

This was a clever take on the prompt by adding science, mistakes in science and a young assistant saving the day. It goes to show you, jumping to conclusions in science never works out well. *Laugh* Benny is quite the bright assistant. I like how the ending turned out. It could have been devastating! *Recycle*

Parting Thoughts:

You followed the rules, prompt. The Prompt words were highlighted in bold font. Also, the word count was within 300 words and given at the bottom of the entry. *PaintP*

Conclusion:

Good job! *KeyC*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of The Adonis  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Purple Wishing WDC Happy 24th
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
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I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest" . Thank you for entering our August "Beat the heat" flash fiction contest. *Bigsmile*

First Impression:

I love the title. How Greek god of you. Adonis, the god of beauty and desire. I knew what to expect just by the title. I also knew I'd enjoy the "heat" by the pool. *Temphot* There was nothing more to do except dive right in. *Smirk*

Further Thoughts:

Your expertise on all subjects romance is impeccable, of course. I always enjoy reading the hot and spicy stories you write. It is a gift, of course. I loved your descriptions of the Adonis, his movements and especially his chocolate eyes. What a dreamy pool that is to imagine diving into. *InLove2*

Your story is told through a writer's mind setting the scene in her head, and becoming the voyeur that pulls the reader right into the story as if participating in the fantasy with the Adonis. Pretty sensual, indeed. *Plug*

Parting Thoughts:

You wrap up the story perfectly. A bit of humor which is always a fine ending. *Cool*

Conclusion:

Good job! And, good luck with the contest. *PenB*


UNitl next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello William MacPoetry Welcome to WDC! *Type*
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I found your item while perusing the "Read A Newbie" page.

Initial Thoughts:

I like your title. It has the strength of personal knowledge earned and learned through many years of life. That alone hooked me into reading your prose-poem. *Broom*

Further Thoughts:

Your lines are wonderfully woven with life's little adjustments as one ages. Yes, early on the need to be "cool" and to fit into a group is usually how the youth feel. Popularity is important. No one wants to feel like an outcast. Thankfully, we grow in time and begin to find our own unique qualities necessary for our success in the workplace. And, to feel normal and comfortable with who we are. It's all a learning experience. *ButtonForward*

As we age, we tend to let go of the group mind set and explore life from more personal view. We enjoy the small things we've missed while running in the rat race. Taking a walk and exploring what nature has to offer. (My interpretation based on your poem. I let my mind wander into my personal experiences over the years as I read this.)

Observations/Suggestions:

"bank & launch" Write out "and" rather than using "&" which distracts from the line.

"But that’s OK," Write out the word "okay it keeps the poem connected to the lines around it without that informality. It blends better with the profound thoughts you've expressed.

Parting Thoughts:

I loved the way you expressed the differences between youthful needs and the realization that as you get old none of that group inclusion and need for popularity matters.

Loved these lines:

"I’ll take my chances on the far outside edges.
I happen to know the guy throwing the bread –"

Very powerful way to wrap up the difference from young to old.

Conclusion:

Great ending!
"loves fois gras." It made me grin! *Bigsmile*

Good job! *Web4*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch






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Review of Short Words  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Starlena
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What brought me to your port?

I found this word search puzzle on the item Type search in my pursuit of new and unique subjects used in these puzzles. Your title, "Short Words" naturally caught my attention.

Further Thoughts:

Some people might think short word puzzles are faster to uncover. I know for a fact that they are not as easy as it may seem. Although the tile is physically smaller than most 25 word puzzles, the find could be challenging. The reason being is that tiny words become cross-over words already solves and hiding within the shaded part of the tile. *Puzzle1*

Suggestions:

Perhaps a bit of description above the tile, large font and color use. Also, adding an image of scrambled letters, etc would add a bit of ambience attracting in a new player. However, I'm here for the daily chores' distraction and the fun of it, so I didn't rate down. *Broom*

Parting Thoughts:

I did enjoy enjoy doing this puzzle. A couple words were well-hidden and took a little patience. In the end I uncovered them all. *Geek*

Conclusion:

Good job! *BurstY*

Until next time--puzzle on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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