Good evening Yellow rose, l was curious and thought l'd call by for a short visit, l took pleasure in reading this lovely piece of work, a modern good Samaritan, l am not very good in doing reviews but l can honestly say that l thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. It is well writing, and has much depth and emotion with the threads of fear running through, a genuine love for man and a deep desire to rescue the young woman touches the heart. This is true bravery,a wonderful Christ like quality. I look forward to reading more of your masterpieces, Lia.
Hi Gondor, l will be interested to see the results of this poll in the near future, will pop in from time to time to see how you went, all the best Lia.
Hello Rich, waw now this is a story l can relate to and have experience a similar situation only difference is that l ended up chucking up at the table and no one has ever forced me to eat more, they just except my no thank you. l think it must be a european thing that mums like to see there children eat well. l love your story and l give it 5 stars. keep up the fabulous writing as you are a super writer. l look forward to reading more of your lovely entertaining stories, it made me laugh, cheers Lia.
I'm pleased that l have had this opportunity to read this cute little poem,l enjoyed it immensely, you have great imagination, a talent that many tend to loose as the merge into adult hood. You have much to be proud of, l have no suggestions for improvement as it is a lovely piece of poetry.
Hello Firedog, first of all l would like to say thank you very much for making it possible for me to have the opportunity to read this little poem. l thought it to be extremely well composed, it's really quite a lovely piece of work, l feel the heavy price of loneliness is sown gently through into the fibers of each sentence. You have a talent for words and your poems tell a story in fact l would go so far as to say that your poem is liken to a canvass and you have cleverly painted a story using your pen as a paint brush. I often sit on the park bench and watch folks stroll past, there too busy to even notice me it as if I'm invisible, yes l can relate to your poem, you have captured it all, great writing, l look forward to enjoying more of your lovely composure's.
Hello Bob, l enjoyed reading your lovely cute poem as it's rather well composed and you have used well thought of words for example a raft and it's waters were wed,and a dream of love forever smooth. You have done a great job in writing the poem and l look forward to reading more.
Hi, Fyndorian's Desk, is a lovely cute little poem and pretty much wright what it says as l have my Tink's Palace and it's my little quiet corner where no one bothers me and it's got my antique table and chair with and old typewriter that barely gets used now since I'm mainly using the computer.My surroundings inspire me to write so l can honestly say I enjoyed your beautiful poem and believe many others will also, Looking forward to reading more of your creative work,write on.
Dear Turtle Green, l thank you for being so kind in letting folks like me read your poetry, when l read your poem l wasn't shore what to expect but as l slowly read this poem l found myself, l see my children and l have to say honestly they don't really know me nor do they understand the things that have scared my life and l too find things hard to forget and every day seems to be heavier for me to carry but today for the first time l can say you have made me see and l am truly grateful to you for that.Your poem is a masterpiece and one that will touch the hearts of many, l can only say that it is a most beautifully written poem and l believe it was meant for me to read, providential, may God bless you. !
Hi David, l stumbled on your poem and l absolutely think it's bonza, you have written a genuinely lovey cute poem and l love it. Your a talented poet David and you use your chosen words well much like an Artist uses his paintbrush. l look forward to reading more of your creations, keep up the great composing.
Dear David, l just popped in mainly out of curiosity, l read your poem and it's just perfectly beautiful, a lovely piece of poetry and so beautifully composed, it takes me back to my childhood where life was without a worry in the world and ever day was a new adventure. Your a very talented writer, your poem has personality, and your words are much like and Artists strokes and he paints his master piece. l thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for making it possible. Lia.
Hi, l was just strolling through your poems and this one on the hot air balloon caught my attention, l will be honest with you, l actually do like it, it's kinda more like a mini story but put into a poem, it not a bad try. I'll read more of your work and let you know what l think of them if you like. Have a great day see ya later.
Hi Y2K, you read my poem and l appreciate your kind encouraging comments and well l thought l'd take a gander at what your work and hay l gotta say it's ok, kinda different but good just the same, l enjoyed reading it and l couldn't find any spelling errors but then my spelling sucks anyway and considering the fact that you tried hard to compose this small master piece you deserve encouragement so I'm giving you some gift points, l look forward to reading more of your talented creation in poetry, thanks for letting me read it.
Hello Jerry, l thought l'd read another poem, this one seems interesting and yet it has a feeling of emptiness and sadness wrapped up in past memories. Depressing thoughts, l kinda felt like crying as it sort of brought things to mind that l had thought l had forgotten, any way besides that l would have to say it's a well composed poem, you are skilled in creating scare poems and l tend to think words come easy because you carry a heavy load. Your a very gifted man you create poems like an Artist paints pictures. l would like to read something of yours that they live happily ever after.
Hello, just completed reading this novel and l have to say l thoroughly enjoyed it. It's well composed with a mixture of excitement and adventure mixed with true to life. This novel has the power to keep one in his seat reading on out of pure curiosity, well done. l look forward to reading more of your master pieces, thank you for giving me the opportunity of reading this short story.
G'Day Xander, thanks for making it possible for others like myself to read your poetry, your not bad as a poet, l rather enjoyed reading this poem, you've no problem at all in spelling so l can't pick a floor, your rhyming is excellent which makes it hard for me to say anything negative, not that l would anyway. All l can say is Waw your good, a very talented master of words, look forward to reading more of your great work, write on.
Hi there, l just want to say that l really like your honest introduction of yourself, you sound think your very open minded and yet tend to mind your own business, a very old fashioned style about you. Your at the same time bubbly for life and yet l feel a sense of loneliness. Your novels are your world and there are times where your so absorbed in them that you don't notice whats around you, sadly you have missed things that know you regret. Your need to widen out and at times forget your novels and enjoy life and those you love because you will not have it for long, life is rather short. As a writer well now that's a different subject, your a natural and it's your whole world, talented writer, one that has the ability to hold your reader in expectation of whats to come, your a modern day Rembrandt that's all l can say. I just feel you need a holiday and it will be of great benefit to you and those you love .
Hello Paratwa, just been reading your poem and it's great, short and sweat, plenty of emotion and well composed written in a way that would touch the hearts of your readers instantly. In just a few lines you have managed to lay out a life time, that's rather well done.
G'Day Tim, l'd like to say first of all that l appreciate it very much that you have made it possible for folks like myself to read your master piece of poetry. You are a fine poet and have managed to compose a poem that consists of much wisdom and that is an outstanding achievement and l'd like to congratulate you for that. You are truly talented and are in my opinion an modern day Rembrandt, I look forward to reading more of your composure's in the future, write on Tim your a marvel.
G'day Chuck, first of all I'd like to say sincerely thank you for letting me read your poem. I can see that you have abilities to be a fine writer in time, however at the moment your a little rough around the edges when in comes to poetry but you will improve. Your poem has a story line and has a great amount of emotion now thats good but you need to work on rhyming and also there are 5 lines in the first paragraph, there are 4 lines in the next 8 paragraphs and then 8 lines in the 8th paragraph, l would most likely have had all the paragraphs with the same amount of lines. You tried very hard in composing your poem and it shows up in the emotions that take control when it's being read, like it but it needs to be more poetic. l think you did a great job and will look forward to reviewing more of your work.
Hello Max, l believe you to be a man that has put your best into your work and has left no stone unturned, your a really great writer. I can only say that your gifted with a writing skill and have a future in being a great Author. All the best.
Hi Ann, l read this story and its great no kiding, your ok. if l was gifted like you l recon l'd make it into a novel book and publish it, hell you'd make a mint. I ain't mucking around ok , your got what it takes.
Hi, Gotta let you now that you can catch a possum no sweet, but don't cause they have rights too to be free. Ok , yep, it's bonza, well composed true to life you got my curiosity and l found it hard to stop reading, SUPER thats about all l can say not that what l said is anything new but l figured you'd be interested just the same. Your a briliant writer and it's nice to know you like what l like as well, any ways l gotta go, thumbs up!
G'Day David, well first l just want to say that l'm so awfully glad that you joined writing.com and thank you for leting me read your poem. Ok l've go to saythat the words touch the heart and heck me as a reader it makes me want to keep on reading, now thats good for starters, to me your poem is sort of leaning on being a novel and yet its a poem, l love the true, shy and quit timmered personality dipped in inocents. You have written a fabulous piece of work, keep up the effort.
Lisa has an interesting imagination, as l read this diary of hers l tend to have a sadness come over me. The if's and but's, the could have's and maybe's with all the possibilities are what tough the heart. Her memories are of a dreamer, one that wishes to be able to recreate and rebuild a life on the past that others have forgotten.
I would think that if her wish was possible, we would mostlikely all want to have a go at reliving our dreams. l really loved reading Lisa's diary, it's truely enjoyable. In my oppinion l would think it deserves to be published and made handy for all to enjoy.
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