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Review of A Daily Blessing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



Our author reminds the reader how much of a blessing the gentleness of dawn comes to greet us.
The darkness of the night serves its purpose to deliver the sleep we creatures need.

Then we find the joy of dawn peeking over the mountains and dale. Bringing the feeling of a new day blooming and oh so welcome.

Thank you for sharing

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



Our author shares the wonder of winter.
So many changes that take place.
So many delights and wonder that fall before our eyes.
There is no way to ignore this season.

Children become artists.
They make angles in the snow.
They ride around on sleighs and give their little friends a HI HO.
Don't kid yourself, winter is the time when hearts open wide, compassion overflows and prayers find their way to the souls in need,

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.

We humans have a way of thinking we control all those things around us.
We make decisions and find no one challenging them.

As in this piece we find two people alone on a huge snow covered mountain. They find themselves flying down recklessly as the mountain observes theirso-called intelligence.

They remarkably survived the race for life down the hill.

Could the mountain have shone some mercy upon them.
Will they take life move seriously next time?

Thank you for sharing.
Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When one partner dies and leaves the other behind, the memories linger with a soft caress around your heart.
So many days and years paint such a magical portrait. So many private words go
along to playfully nestle on your chin.

Thank you for sharing this tender and heartfelt piece.
When we loose someone it helps to know we are not alone.
Bless you.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This good.
Full of emotions.
Full of sincerity.
No hesitation
Ready to be excepted by those listening and those it will touch.
Great sentiment.
Plain English leaving no avenue for doubt.
Bless this love.
Let it grow.
May it blossom from now until forever.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of First Light  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love is Forever



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Give this a read or two.
Stop and think what awaiting avenue of serenity.
Breaking day, morning light, spirits grow and children play.
This is truly a feel good piece.
Thank you for sharing


LOVE THIS PART:
Happiness grows
as spirits rise,
to higher heights
in clear blue skies.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love is Forever


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Our author shares thoughts about the wolves and how different they are from each other and how much they share.

Their stories older than the mountains.
They echo through carried on the wind that has been a constant companion for centuries.

Take the lesson you learn from them and use them to walk a pure, respectful life.

Those beautiful yellow piercing eyes see more than you think

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of February 29th  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
hope this make you smile



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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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This little guy isn't phased by the discreptions of this author.
This cold weather----humbug
Ice cracking----humbug
Cardinals sleep
The March of the storm. humbug

Our character takes the image that we all should.
This too will pass.
Nothing new.
But boy this peanut makes life worth while.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of Elvis  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is so sweet.
You know sometimes life gives us things to do that are mostly black and white.

Then there are some days the we show the strength and compassion of God as we walk along.

This couple found and tiny little soul and needed hearts to hold and care to give it.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Down, almost, as far as he could go, our character begin some self searching.
All the friends and loved ones who believed in him are gone.
He burned all his bridges and was finding it hard to exits.
No one took him for his word.
He had to take his life in his hands and get some help.

God bless the fact that he did.
So many people don't come back from this pit of despair.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Thank you for putting it down straight and not sugar coating it.




Yellow
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Review of Dark Thoughts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


One could look at the night as our author does.
A welcome and delicious event.

Then the stars soon brighten up the sky.

Most of all the on coming dawn with it's birds and their melody.

Take each day and make what you will.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



In this piece we have a person that can't give up completely on a past love.
Still in the deep recesses of the mind all those emotions still wait behind a blocked door.
Other relationships exists but still this on is foremost.
Imagine hanging on like some people do must be painful.
Even hoping they will meet again by accident.

Thank you for sharing.







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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our character feels trapped in this position.
In love but afraid to open his mouth freely.
Telling the loved one is the only thing on his mind.

Sometimes waiting might be a big mistake.
Holding the heartfelt words inside might lead to the lover moving on.

thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Longing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Enchanted by a stranger. How could this be?
Love at first sight is the only explanation.
Our author is in such a emotionally state.
Even feels passion.
How could a stranger bring this on?

Do you believe in love at first sight?
I know I used to believe.
Take my advice look with you mind and put your heart of vacation for just a while.

Things aren't always what they seem.

Yellow
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Review of The Poets Dilemma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Poets have always been important in society.
Whether it be European or here.
Times will get us down and we find it hard to dream.
A poet brings a dream our way.
Whether it be about love or pain or happiness.
There has to be someone out their fighting for us.

Seriously what would we do without the written word?
The emotions it brings to the surface.
If our society gets to the point of not feeling what are we then?

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a glimpse of nature.
Watching an Eagle soaring through the sky as it hunts is a sight to see.
You become hypnotized by the serenity and magic of this beyond compare creature.

Hunting and determined he is careful to stay far away to make the final dissent.
Silently our author watches maybe feeling a bit
intrusive but privileged as well


Thank you for sharing.
Yellow
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Review of Window  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author uses a window to illustrate a dream. On the other side of the glass as all kinds of possibilities.

Some look and say, too much work.
Some break the window without thought of what harm it might do.
Some just dream but move on.

Then there are those that find the ultimate joy of reaching for that dream.
It's not too much trouble when you finally open the window. There it is your goal. Don't measure your how much it took to get there but how your character grew on the way.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Clean your room. We have all heard that when younger.
A boy puts it off as long as possible. His mother warns him that something could be lurking.

She puts her foot down and he starts under protest.
Something starts moving under a lump of clothes

The boy talks to the creature. If he hides the creature he won't get his toy back.

Sure a lot to think about for him.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


I bet this would make a good song.
Reminds me of Rocky Mountain High Colorado.

She is alone and that's fine with her.
She worked the land and that was what she did.
She had a garden but made the flowers flourish even on rocky ground.

We sometimes come across someone in our lives that makes an impression.
The sun would shine on this lady as she worked the cherished ground.

One day she disappeared. Maybe her job was done.
Surely there was no harm done to her.
Maybe an old love come back to take her with him.

Thank you for sharing. Good job with this.


Yellow
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Review of Moving Target  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sometimes we have to make a move. In this case it's down the highway. The trees, naturally, look different. Even you might find yourself hypnotized by the yellow line.
What will be waiting for you due to the consequences of this move. Will there be light and hope or more of the same you left behind. She is taken chances on her life. She figures anything is better in the unknown compared to the known.

It's fogging up. So what?
The best part of all is this drive is under her control. She is in charge now.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He is going fast but needs to go faster. The wormhole will open soon. Just as he came through he mustn't loose his opportunity to travel back.
The space time curvature connects two distant locations. Simply a theory our Einstein thought up.
Boy what a smart man.


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Review of Patience  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings a way of looking at time.
There are some times that times seems to drag by. Even beginning to irritate a person.

Then there are times when time moves quickly, not really allowing enough for us to finish our project.

The most important part is use the time wisely and even be thankful for it.
Some have many many minutes on their side and others only a few.

Thank you for sharing.




Yellow
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Review of Walking In A Haze  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


They were friends, good friends.
Then suddenly things changed.
It doesn't give the reader the reason for their
bridge between them.

Our character refuses to give up on the friend.
Still looking and hoping thing will get better.

There is reference to walking in a haze. Could it be the haze is an implication that the friend might be messing with those that might be doing harm?

When we have a friend down and mixed up with bad people; it's not the time to let them go.
A real friend would keep trying or at least keep an eye on the friend to make sure the friend doesn't get hurt.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This might have been written by a younger person.
Catching a moonbeam in her hand was the highlight of the evening.
Watching it move about at will and then disappeared.

To believe in the impossible is part of being a kid.
Feeling as low they can do those impossible things is just what makes them tick.
It really doesn't really matter whether anyone believes or not. All the counts is the feeling in her heart.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Off-White Pearls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was dealing with the realization that their love was not quite right.

He has stopped spending time with her as before.
He never had much to say as well.

She cries to him about her missing feelings of being loved.

Her husband is beginning to see her pain as he slams the door.

She needs love.
This night she pulled out all the stops.
She met him with nothing but a lovely necklace.
She apparently lost her sparkle as the pearls did.

In his mind he has a COLD thought. All things must end.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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