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This is one of the first story I have written.Please review!
I was walking along the road bored out of my mind. I looked up and saw the old amusement park. It had been shut down for years and sometimes my friends hang out there. Thinking that someone I know might be there I climbed in though the hole in the fence. I got lost in my thoughts. I had had a huge fight with my parents and was thinking about not going back to the house. If I just stay with my friends for a few nights then that will give me some time to cool down. I looked up and discobered that I was lost.Great! Then it started to I ran into the first building I saw.It was the fun house.

There were creepy mirrors and everything was layered in dust. I was about to turn around and walk out again through the door which I had left open when I heard a loud noise .WHAM! I spun around and the door had shut. It must have been the wind there really is a dtorm going on out there I thought then decided to go exploring from the outside this place had looked huge. I walked cautiosly into the next room.
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