My attempt to give Eve her own voice. |
Just a short note on this poem, It is not supposed to be insulting to any christian readers, however just a different take on a classic bible story. I hope you enjoy it, poetry is not my forte! Please give me lots of feedback. The Untruth I am blamed for all female sufferings, Because I was weak at the vast offerings My home the garden of Eden, my crime temptation But do not believe the writings of my emancipation For I was truly alone, the serpent my only friend. I was nothing but a rib, that was snatched, Constantly reminded that I was once attached I was his, and would always be positioned below Individuality was the only thing I urged to show. Reader, I beg of you, can you blame me for my rebellion? The snake enticed me, and yet is never blamed. He ignited a passion, in which I could not have tamed He hissed sweetly, that of course I shall be allowed to eat The fruit on the tree that would taste so sweet, So he picked the fruit, and slowly brought it to my lips. I admit reader, the moment of weakness, But, if you could of tasted absolute sweetness A never before felt orgasm of an explosive scale, That could not be delivered from any fleshed male My actions ignited a flame, in which could not be tamed. Please, do you understand my trails dear reader? Punished with the pain that comes with being a breeder But in my actions I gave you something so much more A feeling in which allows you to blissly soar, So forget all you are told of me, for I realised your need. |