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Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/books/entry_id/929231-Chapter-15-revised-more
by brom21
Rated: ASR · Book · Biographical · #2118726
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#929231 added February 20, 2018 at 7:16pm
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Chapter 15 revised more.
I am learning to put emotional content in with dialog. A person reviewed an old Cramp entry and mentioned he which there was more of it. The reviewer was a preferred author and she gave it three stars. I am going through my novel chapters with this idea in mind. I just went over chapter 15 and made some changes that I did not catch the last time I went over it. I may do more editing later. I got an email from the Story Master requesting for me to review more. It was a group mail I think. I’ still waiting or my MB for my reviewing from last month.
Tomorrow’s the big day – I can play some PS4. I also have to mop too. It is quite cold now – so much Jim did not w ant me to go outside or go the store or whatever. If it is like this tomorrow I will not have to go to the gym. I have to do some flirting with some of the female staff at the gym. I already do the fist bumping thing but I do that with everyone. First I have to refer to them by name. I don’t do that yet. And I don’t remember if the staff has nametags. I do not believe they do.
I’ve watched some more episodes of Regular Show. It is getting funnier. I saw the last episode of Dragons. It ties in with the second full length movie. My mom and I might have watched the last season.
I’m having shrimp tonight. My mom is helping me to cook it. It is pre-cooked but we need to cook in some flavoring. My mom mentioned butter.
Jim is off work. Thank goodness he did not have to work another eight hour shift. He is watching some musical.
Chad is off today and He will be calling soon. Last night he called at about 8 pm. That is when I watch stuff with my mom. Chad will be off work for four days or something close to that. I’ve noticed they do not give him many hours. The poor guy has tendinitis and gout.
Yesterday was my sister-in-law’s b-day. She turned twenty-five. I’ll be that old in June. I hate getting older. I’m just five-and-a-half years away from forty. By then my story will be published though. I wonder how good it will fare. I know the Lord is helping me with my story. It is after all Christian fantasy.
It looks like I may not be doing the Magic Words fantasy contest. And I said I was in too. The minimum word count is 2k words. Tomorrow I will see if I can start something at or a little more over the word minimum. I really think only two people, if that, will enter.
I think I will call Dan during his break at 7 am. I’ve been meaning to do it. I think he might appreciate it – if anything it will make him laugh. I hope he will not just say “Thanks for calling. Bye.” He did do something similar when I texted him once.
Ricky is back from Utah where he went to a seminar. I forget what it was for. I may say hello via text. I think I’ll text my sister for sure.
Well, that is it for now. Goodbye.

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