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Hello ~Lifelessons~ ![]() This is a wonderful short suspense story. I can see where it will improve in intensity once the word count restriction is no longer a factor. ![]() ![]() She'd followed all the rules except one very important one and that was having at least one outside confidant. What a helpless panic she felt. You did very well with the dialogue. I had no trouble knowing who was speaking. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() I had fun today and I know you will have fun once the magic is finished. ![]() ![]()
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