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Review #4025954
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 A Farmer In The Fifties  [18+]
1/2002 Farming dilemmas in the 1950's.
by Fivesixer
Review by Finn O'Flaherty
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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*Ornament3v*Impressions

A stream of fast delivered statements, like a verbal demo.

*Ornament3b*Style

I like the receptive sentences that give the poem rhythm. Also it makes the opinions soumd definite
and forceful.

*Ornament3y*Descriptions I particularly liked

no television...no radio...
no communism...no place like home...

*Ornament3r*Overall

It a reminder that life is what is close to home, because when it comes down to it
that's what effects you most. Conversely today the threat of not having it, or the fear of change can make people unwilling to be aware of the rest of he world and the people In it.
This poem reminds me to appreciate both points of view.


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