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 A link to joy  [E]
She gives me the gift of peace of mind
by Moarzjasac
Review of A link to joy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Moarzjasac *Smile*

*BalloonO* Happy 15 WDC Anniversary my friend. !!*BalloonY*
How are you?.*Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose one of your friends and fans here in WDC and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftR* to you on this awesome WDC celebration.

The Title-
The first thing that did hook me while visiting your port-home and looking for something to review is the given title of your piece.

Most of us looking for joy, and some don't know where we can find joy.
I just think that the given title creates a deep imagery about joy,
and as I read at the given simple description, it made me curious on the word peace of mind that was stated there because it links to the word joy on the given title.
Good job *ThumbsUp* in alluring a reader.

The Body-
I like the first stanza, They are all on the way of asking, it creates on emotion of weary ness.
While I go along the lines, the weary ness that I reflect on the first stanza turns to be hope and peace, being with family, on our home, it always creates a piece of mind in us.
I didn't find any word that can distract the good flow of the piece.

Over all, I can say that I like this piece of yours, it reminds me that we can find joy when we have piece of mind in our family specially unto the simple and little one.

Until next reviewing again!, and always keep on smiling while stay on writing/reviewing.*Smile*

Regards
Samberine Sig.
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