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by A Guest Visitor
Review of Bug Out!  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really like the title of this piece. The description is also quite funny. I came here because I am currently facing a similar situation. I had to show my solidarity, we must all stand together and present a united front. That is the only way those little buggers would learn not to mess with us.

I quite enjoyed reading this. It is very well written, with a lot of expressive lines, "All I need is to out last whats amiss." Yes, that is definitely the internal dialogue that we all have isn't it? "I just have to hang in there until it's gone."

You've described this situation perfectly and the sense of frustration is quite evident in this piece, as it should be.

I have no critique for this, it is very well written.

I hope you're feeling better now.

All the best,



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