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It's Great To Gain  [13+]
Eat up, it's fun! Now an amazing 20 years old!
by Theday
Review by Starling
In affiliation with Cross Timbers Groups  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Title of Work: : It's Great To Gain (Genre: Interactive Story)
Author of Work: : Theday
Date: : July 13th

Plot:
This is an interactive story containing 7462 chapters with multiple endings.

Scene/Setting:
Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you are allowed to write the chapter. The story starts out with the main character being seventeen years old. He is the black sheep of the family because he is tall and skinny. The rest of the family is overweight. The boy wonders what it would be like to gain weight and not be odd man out. He goes to the Mall and finds a store which could possibly help him with his quest to answer his question.

Characters:
Multi-characters depending on how the story is progressing.

Suggestions:
According to the main page, as of July 12, 2016 this story has been going on for over ten years. I have saved it to my favorites, hoping to be able to come back to it and maybe get involved. It must have taken a lot of work to even get this started. As I stated in the Glosery section, I help co-author a fan fiction site, where it is constantly being added to. On our site you come up with a character and then start adding to stories others may have started. Or you can add your own story within certain guide lines. I will come back to this. Write on!

Character Count: 1,276 (tags = 222 Characters)
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