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 | Fatal Attraction  [18+] Natasha plans a surprise which has emotional results  |
| (4.0)| A review for Team GreyJoy ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Review of Fatal Attraction First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review is done for the Game of Thrones contest for the team of GreyJoy. OVERALL IMPRESSIONS: Romantic plans go awry when Natasha gets everything ready for a special evening with her boyfriend Corey. Corey has gone fishing with his brother Mike. The story changes when he calls her on her cell phone and suggests a time out in their relationship. PLOT & CHARACTERS: Natasha has been dating Corey for six months and is ready to let their relationship get physical. She sets up his apartment as a romantic getaway and purchases special lingerie, Then his call wanting to slow things down. She gets angry and breaks a few things. He rushes home and has a change of heart. The quick change does not seem realistic to me. The last paragraph they get physical and this is the erotic portion of the story. I found it a bit tame. SUGGESTIONS/EDITS: None. FINAL THOUGHTS: Cory seems to change too quickly. dblameck  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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