Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

On the lighter side, I love acrostic poetry, I just submit one for an entry contest. It was probably a failing attempt also. I love that you try to unify bad poets like we all need to concede and join a force against the tyranny of good writing!


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

It's fun and follows the rules for an acrostic. It would be good for acrostic lovers. I think writing formulaic poetry is a good exercise in using creativity within boundaries. It forces a different type of thinking.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I'm not sure on the purpose. Are you suggesting that reviewers give writer's undue criticism or that because writer's keep it light they are experiencing criticism? I'm just a little confused about this one.


Glows:

I love the line into words like dynamite even though I don't really get the meaning of its placement. Words can be dynamite depending on how we use them. I like the light heartedness of it too. You don't seem to take it too seriously. I think using humor to highlight our trouble spots is a great way to point our imperfections thereby making it easier to form connections with others.



Grows:

I think I addressed that portion already.



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