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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Elfin Dragon - contest hunting

This is a nice and creative piece you have written. As a reader l did gather some pointers that l can use for story and character building. I did find the hedging technique and overall approach very practical and perfect coming from a well popular and experienced writer...sindbad

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