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Butterflies and Hummingbirds  [E]
Nature at its best.................ovi form
by green supports Israel
Review by KingsSideCastle
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem. I love the cover image. The animals chosen for this poem are two really beautiful sets of animals. I really like the imagery that you are using depicting these creatures flying against the Azure sky. It is a very interesting comparison listing these two animals together and I like how you connect what they have in common.

I love the last stanza. You have a great description of the two animals wings. The hummingbird's rippling features contrast against the butterfly's tattooed wings nicely. It also ends with a great visual image of the two animals eating side by side happily. Nice writing! *Smile*

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