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![]() | The Ballad of Aurora and Cisco ![]() A Ballad (week 28) about my grand-daughter and her cat. ![]() |
" ![]() ![]() "COMPLETED - Zombie Hair Pasta" ![]() A little Mod cooking up a stew Looking for Sr. Mod items to review Comes across a ballad - wow Starts reading of feline (Meow, Meow). The tale's going strong Laughter's building up Young girl treating a kitty Like a frolicsome pup The mother enters the picture Complete with camera And I'm all set to say, "Watch it, Mamma!" And then, oh oh, There's just a chorus I guess the rest is open To interpretation for us. The funniest home video Whatever it means to you You're supposed to Use your imagination, do. While this is valid I can't disagree Somehow it didn't quite Work for me. I wanted to know exactly what happened To girl, kitty, Mamma Were wits dulled and claws sharpened? I must add I appreciate the note That you put at the end for the aspiring poet. I learn a lot about poetry forms When poets, as notes, do spell out the norms. So thanks for doing some of that In this poem about a girl's cat. The title and brief description are good Add 'pets' as a genre? Maybe you could. The layout's fine ML might make it divine. Well, I'll end my review Do give the ![]() - Sonali ![]() ![]()
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