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 | Random Nonsense - topic individualism  [E] A short text about individualism, inspired by the one state from red flood.  |
| (4.5)| "  My Angel Army Oct 2022 Reviews" "COMPLETED Sundae Bloody Sundae" - NEWBIE REVIEW This one showed up on 'read and review' and the title and brief description intrigued me enough to go on. I think you can pick two more genres, maybe 'community' and 'opinion'. Also, do pick an item type - maybe 'prose' or 'monologue'. I like the beginning of the piece, and I like the piece itself. You make a very good point - we need not argue with each other, and we need not cheat systems, if we keep the collective goal in mind instead of our individual selfishness. Suggestions: 1. This has the potential to be a full-fledged essay, with examples and different aspects brought out, if you'd like to expand it. 2. In terms of layout, maybe you'd like to look at font, size, line-spacing. Thanks for sharing this! Write On! Sonali  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 10/30/2022 @ 5:31pm EDT