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 Enemies  [E]
Quick poem I wrote a while ago.
by angelahaex
Review of Enemies  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I visited your portfolio because it's your WDC Account Anniversary.

I must admit, when I clicked on the poem, I thought this would be a sort of rant about enemies. The brief description is clever, giving nothing away! The genres work.

On first viewing the piece, I was surprised at how short it is. Then I read it and wow! Brilliant. You've written 12 words. Just 12 words, but you've captured how the enemy is always there and the dire consequences of making this enemy.

Great job! *Thumbsupl*
- Sonali

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