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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE STORY

Taking a philosophical angle, Karen, a scientist, struggles with faith.

WHAT I LIKED

I thought this was a good character study in regards to faith. The quotation inspiration fit the story.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the third person limited by Karen. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

DIALOGUE

There's a good blend of dialogue and narration. Dialogue tags are used appropriately.

DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scenes.

SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: clinical setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

CHARACTERS

Karen

There's enough here to understand her motivations. She is torn between believing in God or not.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to tell the story.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening intrigues the reader. The ending is hopeful. A solid psychological study. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.