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The Sword and the Song  [13+]
A dragon invades and two princesses rise to defend the land.
by Amethyst Angel🍂🧡
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I love this story. It sounds like a beautiful peaceful land. the pace of the story was good. I loved the characters. It is well built tale. My favorite part was where her music changed the dragon into a cute little pet. The music soothing the savage beast was really predictable I knew from the first that it would tame the dragon, but didn't expect it to transform it completely. Though it used a lot of common fantasy elements this story was pleasantly surprising. The traitor shocked me like the devious princes betrayal in Frozen. This was a nice little twist. I do think that the princesses should rule the kingdom jointly since they each have their own type of wisdom and both types together make a good ruler like king Arthur. My one question is how the traitor ordered the dragon to attack from the center of the kingdom. Was the dragon intelligent enough to understand and follow a plan. Also why didn't he just ride the dragon into the castle and declare himself king. Then the princesses would have been too scared to act.
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