Hello, Gaby!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I wanted to give you some cheer and care to celebrate your anniversary and encourage you while you're gearing up for the big April GoT event (because you probably won't even have time to respond to reviews in April haha!), and I hope you enjoy this celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I thought this was a true story and was feeling horrible for you! SO HORRIBLE. So you get an A+ for emotional response.

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. And I was mighty relieved to know (at the very end) that it was fiction. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I bet you were a master excuse giver as a kid! No "the dog ate my homework" for Gaby... she had MUCH more inventive things to say lol. Just guessing here... but I'd be surprised if I were wrong. You have a flair for fiction! Well done!


I wondered what challenge this was for? But it was so long ago... I wouldn't remember. If you do, I'll be super impressed.

Your story read like a friend telling a story, which I think is perfect. Well done!

You kept things flowing and I didn't pause once to stop reading to wonder about anything else. Riveting indeed. Well done!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your riveting story. Well done!

Your story was interesting to me, felt like it was a real life event, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's perfect as it is. Well done!





CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and sense of humor and I enjoy reading your blog posts and other writings. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .