Awesome I don't know if the last paragraph about guy means he wasn't an angel or what but I love the last glimpse of him. I am so glad that they found each other and fell in love. I am happy about Brian and Stan's improved relationship. I just love the whole story. I am not accustomed to reading scripts but it read just fine to me it was longer than I expected it to be but I wouldn't have left out a bit to make it shorter. The part where Stan practically hijacked the bus after stopping the robbery was a bit extreme but it was a necessary breaking point for Stan.