The punctuation of this poem is lacking as in even lacking apostrophes where they should go. Usually I can ignore punctuation inadequacies in poetry but apostrophes in possessives and conjunctions are a must for a proper read.

That said I sympathize with the poet on the way some just want to shove a pill at any inconvenient emotion. How is it that other people think they have the right to value or devalue another person's emotions in that way. Sometimes there is a benefit to letting a pensive mood flow through you.

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