I thought you did a great job with the point of view in this story. It was unique and kept my interest throughout. I also thought the vagueness of the specific details really worked to keep the reader guessing.

While I enjoyed the technique of not specifically identifying what we're seeing to keep it authentic to the narrator's point of view, some additional details to make it easier for the reader to identify what's been talked about. I don't think it has to be explicit, but some parts of the story were definitely so vague that they needed to be read a couple of times to get a proper sense of.

Overall, this was an enjoyable story told through a unique perspective. Well done!