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I Think I Do  [E]
Falling in love, written from my husband's point of view.
by StephBee
Review of I Think I Do  
Review by GERVIC🐉
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings StephBee !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones. This is my fifth review to celebrate your Account Anniversary. I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems.

In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


"I Think I Do" is a delightful ode to the giddy rush of new love, a playful snapshot of the moment infatuation starts to blossom into something deeper. The poem exudes charm through its use of a sing-song rhythm, endearingly awkward phrasing, and the whimsical repetition of the line "And I think I do." This line subtly reveals an inner conflict – a hesitant joy as the realization of love dawns.

Beyond infatuation, the poem hints at a genuine blossoming affection. The speaker feels surprised and flattered to be the object of such devoted attention. Lines like "I didn't know I mattered" suggest a yearning to be seen, understood, and truly valued by another – a beautiful sentiment often felt during love's transformative stages. This desire for connection reveals a potential for lasting love beyond the initial intoxicating rush of emotions.

The poem avoids overly serious introspection, instead drawing strength from its simplicity and relatable language. The phrases "meshed, mumbled, bumbled, and jumbled" are delightfully quirky while still perfectly capturing the disorientation brought on by falling in love. These moments of playful self-deprecation reveal the speaker's vulnerability and add a touch of humor that makes the poem all the more endearing.

Overall, "I Think I Do" is a proof to the heart-fluttering, world-shifting magic of the early stages of love. It doesn't delve into deep psychological territory, but its value lies in its ability to evoke a shared experience – the wonderful confusion, the sweet uncertainty, and the unexpected joy of realizing a crush might just be turning into something much, much more.


Best regards,
Gervic

GoT House Targaryen :: Gervic


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