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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby ~ Way behind!

"Game of Thrones"  Hello Fellow Writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.Title: National Goof Off Day!First Impression: Good for You! Why not? You decided to have some fun and somehow incorporate several of The Writer's Cramp prompts into an entry. What you accomplished makes as much sense as other offerings I have read. Yes, this is goofing off if you copy and paste. The humour is that you made a big effort to do this. You also expelled actual effort and created something original.What needs your attention: Nothing! This, whatever it is, stands on its own. You made your point.What part I liked best: I liked the entire concept and the execution. Brilliant. All those various prompts combined to celebrate a national all-be-it obscure holiday. Take that Goofing Off Day. If this special occasion was indeed sentient it would be flattered and over joyed by this poem. You earned that nap in my humble opinion. You must not over exert yourself. There will be many more holidays to honour and observe.Overall Impression: This poem is clever and fun. The judges probably did not know what to do with it. I hope they appreciated the surprise. Thanks for allowing me to read your work. It ahs been my pleasure! What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.(1355 characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions on this review are mainly things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.