Greetings Krista is Taking a Break !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


"Sparkle & Crackle" transcends its brevity to craft a rich and introspective scene. The poem employs contrasting elements to paint a captivating image. The "flickering" and "tiny" candle stands in stark opposition to the metaphor of a "beacon" and a "dancing star," highlighting both the fragility of the flame and its enduring capacity to illuminate. This duality is further emphasized by the way the candle both "warms the room with gentle grace" and "casts a spell upon my face," creating a sense of comfort intertwined with a touch of mystery.

The poem's strength lies in its ability to evoke a deeply personal experience. The line "The night retreats, it leaves no scar" isn't just a description of the darkness being pushed back; it personalizes the effect. The darkness transforms from something potentially menacing to a mere inconvenience, a testament to the candle's comforting power. Here, the poem suggests a sense of vulnerability dispelled by the warm glow.

But "Sparkle & Crackle" goes beyond mere physical comfort. The concluding line, "In candlelight, I find my place," hints at a deeper sense of self-discovery cultivated within the quiet contemplation offered by the flickering flame. The simple language throughout the piece belies the poem's depth, leaving a lasting impression of tranquility and a newfound sense of belonging amidst the gentle glow. The poem's brevity compels the reader to ponder the deeper meaning behind the image, prompting introspection within the comfort offered by the solitary candlelight. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!


Best regards,
Gervic