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 Winter is Coming  [ASR]
A Winter-themed madlib written in connection with Game of Thrones (2024).
by Jeff
Review of Winter is Coming  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi, Jeff!

Thank you for this fun mad lib game with winter theme! I hope you benefit from this review in some way and find it encouraging and uplifting. I also hope you enjoy your time on this site. It is a wonderful community of writers. I have been enjoying your and the other Free Folk's Game of Thrones posts in the news feed. *Smile* I figured I ought to review something for at least one of you this month. So here you go!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* You compiled a fun and interesting winter-themed Madlib game that I enjoyed playing.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* I wondered if my results would copy and pasted and they did! I think the things that don't make sense are more because of my doing things like having a past tense verb (I know better, yet there it is).

*Bulleto* Here are my results. I laughed and thought (maybe more like hoped) you might too:

"Jaeff, the Empress of the Free Folk, was determined to win the Game of forest. He prepared by focusing on peony and sunshine, but he got distracted by a/n brilliant sunshine. Thankfully, he had Jody to help him. Together, they transitioned and managed to sped. After that, they traveled southeast and traversed the avalanche, which was really difficult to do in the winter, when it was hail and blizzard.

But the winter months didn't bother Jaeff, who was famous for building snowmen and a pretty good amateur hockey player. In fact, he set national records for high jump with stilts and boulder surfing, although he still feels anger about Randy Travis for showing him up in bobsledding at the Pyeongchang Winter Olympic Games in 2018."


CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* Thank you for the smile! It's cold and rainy here and I'm caring for a family member who recently had surgery and is kind of miserable (prayers appreciated!) so the laugh and smiles were welcome.

*Bulletv* You have a great writing style and sense of humor and I enjoyed your Madlib game. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler




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