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 Review #4749997 |
 | More Earlier Poems  [ASR] Rediscovered some of my old stuff, needs refinement or trashing  |
| (5.0)| Hallo! This item currently contains three poems. All three speak directly to the reader, bringing out the essential element of something that seems everyday. Descriptions are effective and evocative. Poem #1: Lady I love it. It shows how someone whom the world considers 'ordinary' - not worth a second glance or thought - can actually be dignified, even heroic. Poem #2: Smells I was expecting something about smells in general, but you got to the point at once. I can relate to this poem personally, having been dumped myself. I appreciate the wistfulness for the one aspect you miss, that you bring out so well. Poem #3: If I Had My Druthers. . . I like John Denver's music but have heard only a few songs. I'll have to look up this one and hear it, now! The scene is cozy and the last line made me smile! Thanks for sharing these gems! - Sonali  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/06/2024 @ 3:13pm EDT