Ladybug [E] Winner of Writer's Cramp contest 240203 |
Hello! I found your poem at Random. I'm with the "The WDC Angel Army" I enjoyed reading it and I hope you find this feedback useful. Positive: I like the title of your page because I also like Lady bugs. Overall Impression: I'm glad I found this poem because when I was reading it, it reminds me of seeing one but Ladybugs will get on you. I heard they are for good luck but I don't know how true it is anyway. I do like them because they are friendly. Suggestions: The only thing I would suggest, Keep on writing because you are good at your poems. My Thoughts / Side Notes: I will come visit your port soon and I have to see what you got here. I'm going to fan you, so I can review more of your items. Thank you for sharing Beacon Disclaimer: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.
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