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 Trauma  [E]
I gave him many chances, but he kept on betraying me. Until it turns to trauma.
by Erica Que
Review of Trauma  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's wonderful rhyming poetry. Undoubtedly, it was an unfortunate incident, but it occurred in real life.
The teller showed enormous faith him in several times, but he broke it every time. He didn't care to honour her love and faith. Despite those dishonours, she couldn't leave him but felt pain.
Once, she didn't tolerate those and was in deep trauma.
He left her life. After a long time, she could recover from trauma, fortunately. After recovery, she wished to rebuild a strong future.
I especially like the positive end of what the poet does.
I can see a bright future for you.
Keep writing.

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