It is a good short story. It fulfils almost all the characteristics of the short story. Except one. The number of characters is too many. That should be the minimum in numbers.
The central character of the story is none other than Ernest Campbell. He was patronizing a local bar called The Devil’s Chemistry. He was arrogant. Piece always hampered if he was present there, both at home and outside.
Another important character in the story is Stephen. Another arrogant and dark character. He murdered Ernest Campbell in jealousy and buried him in his garden.
Police rescued the body and the funeral began. Everybody admired him. He went well over all kinds of disrespect which he earned in life.
The pace is smooth and creating the interest for the next. It continues all through the story.
It's well written.
I hope that your good work will be continued in future, too.
Keep writing.



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