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 Eyes of Mist  [13+]
Ayala never had any doubts that the Shakaree were evil. But then she met one of them.
by ForgottenDreams
         Review for entry/chapter: "6 - The Guardian" 
Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Tamaril was in the who tried to attack the Jorcan and Ayala from the shadow. They got nervous. But, a good sense of Tamaril prevailed. So he controlled himself to do the damage.
Ayala became senseless in that incident. Jordan was a bit anxious but remained strong. Then, he decided to take care of her properly. So Ayala got a guardian as Jorcan.
In the end, a little misunderstanding happened between them. Jordan left the but a long time ago. Would he return? This is the main question. We have to wait to know the answer for the next chapter.

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