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 Day 2 Oct nano Prep  [18+]
Sunday, Oct. 02 CONTEST ROUND: Write a background story about your protagonist.
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Greetings,

I found this using the Random Read and Review button…

Oh boy, this is great. You have the bones of an excellent story here, and you must have written it so quickly, all in one day. It could take me a week to assemble a backstory and a character like Sam in my head… although upon consideration, I already have a redhead Samantha in there who needs a story of her own *Laugh* I need some of that NaNo energy now; I’ve got fifteen short stories to write for Jeff’s Music Anthology project, due by July 1st.

I know this is just a rough narrative to use as notes, but it reads as well as anything I’ve read around here, with a couple minor typos for coming together fast. I love the way Samantha’s character is sketched out, and I love her as a character. It seems any novel involving her would be delightful. The way you’ve described her relationship with her mom and dad, and how she loves people watching in the beautiful places in Europe and filling notebooks with thoughts and descriptions… it’s all so relatable and makes for a delightful vignette of a very interesting lady.

May I ask how this project turned out? Did you complete the NaNo? I think I’d like to learn more.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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