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 Fingers of Betrayal  [18+]
Suspense story I've worked on for years. Needs lots of work. This is only the beginning.
by Skurpio
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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That was a Wednesday morning, four hours or so. The incident already occurred on the previous day. Suspense began. Who was the culprit? This was the million-dollar question. Suspects were a few. The fingers of betrayal towards Steve, Bill, Shannon or any other? It's too early to predict anything.
Suspense continues.
Write on!

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