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 A Gathering of Minds: Truth or Dare  [E]
A mind-numbing era of calamity - a poem about true greatness.
by Tim Chiu
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings,

A fine, thoughtful poem, stuffed with philosophical musings on the madness of today’s world and the cultural battles we all face. I love your tidy way of writing poetry, with neat rhymes and steady meter. You are able to say serious things with a form that most people might consider trite and predictable.

The theme is that of rising above the madness with truth and facts, being able to lead by example and create order out of the chaos that ensues when truth is disregarded and emotions run high. In a world where feelings so often dictate the way things are done and how people interact amidst cultural issues and differences.

I enjoyed reading it and have no suggestions for improvement, as it’s open to interpretation and conveys a lot of meaning.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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