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 Stand Tall  [E]
about relationships
by Sara Persaud
Review of Stand Tall  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The poet shares with us an experience of a relationship. The basis of every relationship is respect. If disrespect has been shown so frequently, that relationship does not last long, it must break down like a castle of sands.
That is what happened in the teller's life.
His/Her partner was not ready to give minimum respect. As a result, the relationship broke down. As a human, the narrator feels better. Now, none would insult unnecessarily. As a human, the teller may live a free and respectful life.
It's truly a wonderful poem. Everything is outstanding.
But you must work on choosing genres. It is very vital. Genres are indicators of your writing. You can use the genRelationship', 'Experience', 'Emotion' or any other suitable genres. 'None' is considered as a negative genre. Try to avoid its application.
Go ahead.
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