Hi Jimmy,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of shock and loss. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone recovering from a painful, toxic relationship. I remember when I left my own painful relationship years ago. I was bewildered at first, and had to take time for me. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.