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 it's coming....  [E]
free format poem on autumn
by ElaineElaine
Review of it's coming....  
Review by StephBee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

The poem was about autumn and what autumn brings.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poet uses a good economy of words in a succinct fashion to visually put the reader in the season. Well done.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion would be to increase the font on WDC to make it easier to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Hay rides, unbridled play" The words here are few, but they're still very visual. If you've ever had a hay ride, you can remember those sensations. The hay is a bit prickly, the air is usually cool and crisp, and an underlying feeling/emotion of fun is there.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader and keep them reading. The title hints at what is coming... which words. The title also builds anticipation. I enjoyed the progression of the poem as it progressed much like the season.

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