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 DAP Declassified: Incident 35-B  [ASR]
Incident 35-B, German U-boat encounter with Organism 35, dubbed "Theta".
by Tucker
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Well, this looks like an interesting story tidbit. It's WW2, and a German U-Boat is looking for American convoy ships trying to help resupply England. However, their mission soon changes, when, during a routine attack on a convoy, some strange creature attacks them. Only due to the captain's quick thinking, is the crew able to escape the creature's grasp, managing to surface, only to encounter the vessels escorting the convoy. Raise the white flag.

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Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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